This story is waaaaaaaay too long. Split it into maybe 3 books. Also needs a crap load of polishing

Wow, I never even got the impression that Norman was even remotely feminine in appearance. I don't remember him ever even being described as having soft features, slim body, or even an androgynous appearance. I've read the whole fic thus far picturing him as looking something like a 30 year old Matt Smith and now I've got the image of Matt Smith with breasts in my head.

Here's hoping Norman doesn't survive this fic. Dude is a sick and twisted degenerate.

Why is Tali asking Legion questions he's already answered in an earlier chapter? Why is she blaming the Geth for the Quarians having to live on their ships when she knows it was the Council who wouldn't let them settle on any other planets? How does she figure that the Geth are to blame for other "organic" races treating her people like second hand citizens? Why doesn't Legion defend himself from the accusations that would be so easy to defend against?

Excelente historia
Queria sugerirte si has pensado en escribir Crossover entre Mass Effect y series de space oipera

Jesus Christ, just realised that it's been a decade since this first dropped. That's wild, dude, what the fuck.

How did they even know that the Coalition is called the Coalition if they don't even have any references for the language?

Other questions pop up as well, but I'm none too keen on raising them on an ancient chapter in a half-decade old fic at the moment.

Yes please.

I had an idea where you add other video games to this crossover that are of a similar genre and aesthetic to help make the world more full the best example being Metro Exodus as it’s a nuclear apocalypse like Fallout and I would also add Bioshock and We Happy Few as they have similar aesthetics to it as well maybe also one of the Zombie Apocalypse games like Left 4 Dead but that might be too much

Re-reading it after watching Fallout series, still a bloody good read, man!

Congrats, you lost me in the first chapter by killing off THE FUCKING MAIN ANTAGONISTS.

The Batarians fucked round and found out

Okay it seems in this universe Raul was never told about Vault 22 for some reason. What is going on with Harold and Bob right now anyway?

I'm loving this so far. Even though we're way past this point I still want to point out that, though I love the story, it is a little heavy on the exposition.

where the brotherhood?