|Reviews for The Hidden Progression|
| Lex chapter 2 . 7/30/2014
| Pyreflies Painter chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Whoops. The 'Review Sent' button has a mind of its own. Apologies.
Continuation: duplicates the nerdier conversations in the show.
Overall, great job and please do continue!
| Pyreflies Painter chapter 2 . 6/22/2013
I'm impressed! You have managed to display their affection for each other while staying true to their characterisation- something not many Shamy writers have achieved. Thus, you have constructed a well-balanced, beautifully-written fanfic. Congratulations!
Finally, you made a mention of a scientific study which is a vital component of the show. I'm sincerely glad I've found yet another fanfic which captures the science aspects of the comedy. Thank you! There's not enough out there which actually attempts to du
| pia-lexandra chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Thank you for this! I love missing moment pieces, and this fits so perfectly with the show. You do such a beautiful job of writing their straight forward though slightly awkward interactions, while still hinting at their underlying attraction for one another. Your last line left the biggest smile on my face! Please continue!
| Maynard chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Hoo, boy. :/
| Tefany chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
So much Cute!
| Me chapter 2 . 7/25/2012
Yay! So adorable. Too many angsty Shamy stories have been written as of late, fluff is a nice thing too! Thanks for writin!
| Someone chapter 2 . 6/2/2012
Hey there! Missed me? :)
You know, I have a theory about why this last chapter didn't get as many reviews as the first one. It wasn't dedicated to me! xD
Seriously though, this chapter was awesome. I loved the fact that Richard Feynman let Amy pet him (and how weird did that just sound?), and that Sheldon can't keep glancing contentedly towards him on her lap (again, didn't that sound weird?). Also, this: "Of course it was delicious. If my mother's cooking wasn't that good then I wouldn't even let you have a bite." D'awww! And how cute is it that he spontaneously decides to give away his cats given that he's got Amy back? This is all so sweet! Not to mention the trip to the zoo! Fluffiness overload! :D
Also, I'm really glad that you edited your grammar mistakes. My latent OCD is eternally grateful for that. And since you said you don't mind nitpickers... "Anti-histamines" are more commonly spelled "antihistamines". And in the first chapter it should be "serotonin", not "seratonine" (you corrected it the first time, but not the second). You know, because I just had to point out the medical details. Heh.
Anyway! It was great, as usual. It even inspired another author to write a prequel! Would you look at that? You're so awesome people get inspired just by reading your stuff! Take care, keep writing, keep updating and keep being awesome. And long live the Shamy! ;)
| XMarisolX chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
Your attention to detail and adherence to the actual episode was very impressive.
| jhnigbhgvbkihtgs4erw chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
i do like nitpicking, but i didnt find a mistake around so im sure your fine :)
great story, i didnt think there was anything that really needed to be explained out of that episode but you somehow found an important gap to fill in, great!
:) :) :)
| Pomita chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
I love the cat descriptions, and how Amy manages to win them all over. And especially their little moment of eye-locking at the end. 3
| Mrc90 chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
So cute :)
Great new chapter, loved it!
| ilovebazinga chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
aaww, this chapter was sweet, odd and so shamy! good job!
| hope for eternity chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
Shamy and cats... what more do we need?
| Shelle007 chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
oh soo cute! Loved it!