|Reviews for dragon ball|
| ird chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
make each chapter longer but dont change anything and it will be the best
| Tami Berrigan chapter 18 . 11/7/2012
Excellent. Love it Lucas. Another example why you should be a writer and publish your stories.
| Orlando chapter 5 . 11/6/2012
Is the first paragraph your peom cause Its pretty tight! props on the story line too.
| Tami Berrigan chapter 16 . 8/27/2012
These chapters keep getting better. I like how u start each new chapter because it grabs your attention right away. . Can't wait for number 17.
| Jirouto chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
haha this is nice even though short well done!
| Tami Berrigan chapter 14 . 6/24/2012
Wow another great chapter loved it nephew. I can't believe chuck lost. Another great chapter. Keep writing!
| Tami Berrigan chapter 13 . 6/16/2012
This was another exciting chapter. Flowed well and was Easy reading. Keep writing you have a creative mind.
| Tami Berrigan chapter 12 . 6/12/2012
Awesome story . It kept my interest the entire time . Looking forward to the next one.
| Billy B chapter 9 . 6/6/2012
Great story my man. Thoroughly enjoyed it. Keep on writing with that creative mind of yours.