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Guest chapter 5 . 4/9/2017
Loved it.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/8/2017
" It felt worse than when the dentist told her he was just going to 'polish her tooth pits' "

Lol I can't take it. XD so much sugar-coated abuse
Guest chapter 3 . 4/8/2017
"Hey, don't mix those up," Emma said wearily, abhorred to think she might get stuck with the heart of an Evil Queen.

Hahaha favorite part of chapter 3
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2017
"Ranch flavored rice cakes," -Yuck! X(
FaBbEr0oZ chapter 5 . 10/16/2015
If I had a choice between the Enchanted Foresthe and this world? Always this world. We have technology! And WiFi. And cheeseburgers
ShadowCub chapter 5 . 9/20/2015
The fucking forest?
connyx chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
I so do hope you stoped next chapter at a point which would make a kind of an ending.
connyx chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
I was between sad tears and laughing so much I can't decide what overtook.
A bit strange but then so great in the same minute.
Damn I have to do a beeak. Damn work. Lol
connyx chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
Wow.. kinda dark angsty scary chapter end.
Love it.
I know uou haven't completed this story and I'm pretty sure you won't. But I do hope the ladt chapter will end in a way to deal with it.
connyx chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
You came up with some interesting ideas. Very nice.
Looking forward to what's coming next.
AustinMarina chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
I love you sense of timing and humour:

"Through closed eyes, she said with wonder, "I think it's working…is that it?"

"That's my breast, Ms. Swan. Let go,"
KeptinSight chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
Hope you continue soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
Great story. Is this the end?
karjens44 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
!find a position and get on with it ". Omg best line of anything I've ever read. Lmao. I'll be laughing at that and that last bit for a while. I love it. Would write more but I have to get to chapter 2...
Googlekins chapter 5 . 6/20/2012
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