|Reviews for One Line|
| Lanaholic chapter 4 . 9/19/2013
I so do hope you stoped next chapter at a point which would make a kind of an ending.
| Lanaholic chapter 3 . 9/18/2013
I was between sad tears and laughing so much I can't decide what overtook.
A bit strange but then so great in the same minute.
Damn I have to do a beeak. Damn work. Lol
| Lanaholic chapter 2 . 9/18/2013
Wow.. kinda dark angsty scary chapter end.
I know uou haven't completed this story and I'm pretty sure you won't. But I do hope the ladt chapter will end in a way to deal with it.
| Lanaholic chapter 1 . 9/18/2013
You came up with some interesting ideas. Very nice.
Looking forward to what's coming next.
| AustinMarina chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
I love you sense of timing and humour:
"Through closed eyes, she said with wonder, "I think it's working…is that it?"
"That's my breast, Ms. Swan. Let go,"
| KeptinSight chapter 5 . 7/13/2012
Hope you continue soon.
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/30/2012
Great story. Is this the end?
| karjens44 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
!find a position and get on with it ". Omg best line of anything I've ever read. Lmao. I'll be laughing at that and that last bit for a while. I love it. Would write more but I have to get to chapter 2...
| Googlekins chapter 5 . 6/20/2012
KEEP GOING! Write MORE INLOVE with IT!
| srhittson chapter 5 . 6/19/2012
good story please update soon
| LOCISVU chapter 5 . 6/3/2012
WHAT!Okay,I wonder why would Regina even want the portal to remain open?
| thongsong chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
Regina, Regina. Some people never change. Hope This is not the end.
| polybi chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
So much I loved about this story. And so much saddens me. I just wish in on of these stories that Storybrooke would be a place that people would want to stay. For many it has been a place of redemption and renewal, including for Emma & Regina.
But that is me
I hope down the road there's a followup.
| mar chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
AWESOME UPDATE TOTALLY LOVED HOW REGINA LEFT THE PORTAL OPEN FOR RETURNING AGAIN SOME DAY GREAT THEY COULD TOTALLY SNUGG UP STUFF JAJJA UPDATE SOON.
| swanqueen84 chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
I'm glad they're all Storybrooke is totally destroyed? Post again soon.