Reviews for Where Soul Meets Body |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you portray Finnick and Annie! Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read more. :] |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your Annie. She's a little more silly and goofy than I pictured but that's ok. She describes herself as shy but I don't see it really. She did do the District 4 dance in front of people she's known a day. Doesn't seem too shy to me. Her conversation with Finnick about life after death is interesting. It makes sense for them to think about it even if Katniss never did. Looking forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this. "Sometimes I think they reaped you because they knew I would love you." this is what i always believed |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Love it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your Annie. She's a little more silly and goofy than I pictured but that's ok. She describes herself as shy but I don't see it really. She did do the District 4 dance in front of people she's known a day. Doesn't seem too shy to me. Her conversation with Finnick about life after death is interesting. It makes sense for them to think about it even if Katniss never did. Looking forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is off to a good start. Looking forward to reading more. I love the eay you introduced Annie's family. Her sister seems sweet. And good ol' Finnick: So cocky on the outside, caring on the inside. I'm looking forward to reading how you write Annie's games. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was hooked from the beginning! This is just amazing. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so sweet! Her little brother just made me wanna cry. And Finnick Odair? You nailed him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! My favorite line was "Or perhaps it's that every time I glance at him, all I can see are his muscled arms lifting the trident that dig into the flesh of a girl in his own Games." I like how you're showing the story gradually, and how she particulary dislikes Finnick in the beginning. You've painted Annie as a very dynamic character, and I adore the way the chapter flows and wraps together at the end. Pretty please update soon? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your description is amazing and I love the idea for this story. Its very well written so far and I'm interested in reading more. |