|Reviews for Military or Mafia Roulette|
| just someone chapter 2 . 9/16/2014
I love your story it so amazing you don't know who to trust your my fav writer why don't
you publish your books xxxxxxxxxx
| GUEST chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER SAY THIS BUT THIS IS BORING NOT VERY NICE IAM VERY UPSET PLEASE MAKE THE
NEXT CHAP GOOD OK PLEASE IAM COUNTING ON YOU !
BUT IT WAS VERY FUNNY
| asdfjkl09874321 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
Aw.. Yup! Her brother and mother told her so. Dx She didn't listen! And did those other kids ever tried to escape? 'cause how would they know it's impossible if they never tried it before? Well.. maybe it is kinda impossy since they just kids. And even I wouldn't try anything either.. if i were them. XD I'm also too cowardly. But stills.. if what they says are true XDD they gots some pretty awesomey powers! ...ohyeahs. "fell of the tree" I'm xurr should say off. And there was one other thing... XXD but I forgot. lol
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
omg, love love love love this story
| ChocolateChipMuffins chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
So Alisha is in Japan? I wonder how she will react when she meets the cast! Lovely chapter
| WinterAngel24 chapter 2 . 6/11/2012
Good follow up! I'm looking forward to your next chapter and seeing more development within the characters and their bonds with the others!
Good job and good luck!
| Akela Victoire chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
The pace you set in this is pretty good, it flows well, no grammar/spelling errors that I can spot... No complaints here!
| ChocolateChipMuffins chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Wow,nice improvement. I really enjoyed it! Can't wait for the next chapter! -
| WaterLily66 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I am reading this story as suggested by WinterGuardianAngel24, and wow! This had my heart racing! It also really goes out to those kids! DX
I'm glad the grammar was fixed up, it made for a much more enjoyable read.
I look forward to the next chapter! Thanks for revising this story and putting it up!
| Fanamaniac chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Woah, it's been quite some time since I reviewed a story and that review button looks amazingly huge! Interesting...
Anyway, I'm not the first this time round XD (I forgot to review yesterday cos I was too tired) but at least there are others who appreciate this newly revised story!
A definite marked improvement! I have only some vague impressions on the from the previous one but I still remember bits and pieces of it and I must say, characterization development is kicking off a lot better.
The S-something something (don't want to spoil it for the rest XD), is it still the name of the bar reading members? Anyway, they do sound a lot more creepier in this version.
The pace for this is definitely a lot quicker and much more interesting, compared to the one before which took around 9 chapters or so? :O
Keep up the great work Preppy! Kudos to Beta-chan as well! No mistakes spotted at all. I shall be waiting for the next chapter(s).
| WinterAngel24 chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Yay! This is turning out great! You've explained their background and left us wondering what their powers would look like in action!
This is a great starting chapter and leaves only anticipation and curiosity for the next one!
| DisilludedNight chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Oh This pace is certainly faster. But I like it and I think it's better than the last version.
*laughs nervously* Acually, I kinda forgot a bit about the older version...so I'll be looking forward to this series.