Reviews for Somewhere
KFF chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I don't know what it is, but your writing style seems rushed to me, and that puts me off reading the story. It seems more like someone telling the story and that makes the flow of the story uneven and hard to read. It's most likely a good story, but not for me, sorry.
Chris Pine Fan chapter 2 . 6/9/2012
Aw another good chapter. :) glad that Ryan is happy to being a dad again, hope Leah will want to know her birth parents. :) keep up the good work.
Chris Pine Fan chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
hey Lynsey :) I loved how you started the story out. Wonder how Leah will meet her parents for the first time. Continue when you can ;) love the story your doing a good job :) I'm still going to read your other stories to :)