I absolutely loved this story. It was wonderful to see Sookie characterised as a strong women, yet not someone who is so prideful that they are unable to behave sensibly (definitely one of my pet peeves).

I couldn't put this down! I'm now off to see what else you have written.

Absolutely loved it. Took a while to read the whole thing, but definitely worth the time spent. Thank you for writing!

I totally enjoyed this story. Excellent writing and very original.

I forgot how good this is. I enjoyed rereading it. loved it.

This was a lovely story and a good way to end it :) also Bubba :D

I just finished this story.. It was like a good book that I could not put down..really!

Thank you for writing a wonderful story. I could gush on and on, but I won't. This is definitely a story that I will come back to in a while when there is nothing good to read on this site.

Jess

so I just found your story, and it was amazing! I was sad to see it end!

You're a really good writer but it's disorientating when you slip into present tense.

Oh no, Ghellert

Edinburgh would be such a great move for this Sookie. But only if her vamps came with. I understand missing her family - but she strong and smart and already made the break to Shreveport. She'd have more money, she could visit a few times a year. The work, the location...but losing Eric? No way, deal breaker.

And she trips over his discarded towel the next morning...
So complicated, this relationship and the politics of it all, and yet he's still a man ;)
Although I often do wonder why someone who does seem as clean and...hygienically aware...as Eric would be so sloppy with his things. Hmmm...

Oooh - I agree, this was a good chapter! Love, Lovers quarrel, and some serious supe shi % about to go down!

Huh...blind and dumb...interesting take on his being bespelled...far worse than amnesia actually!

Merrrrry Christmas, Sookie! I am impressed with how willing she is to go into this...stage of things without knowing where she stands with Eric. I understand why...and this Sookie is more sure of herself, out on her own as an archaeologist in Shreveport...but hopefully she gets her questions answered soon ;)

Quite a kiss...