|Reviews for In their sleep|
| Eddie1398 chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
| rocknroll419 chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
THOUGH SHORT THAT WAS AWESOME! Because im also a fan of this pairing! Nice work!:)
| The seventh cat chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Heart-warmingly funny and sweet. Good style, apt ending. I like the way the actual revelation is only mentioned. Continue writing fanfics.
| dracot chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Muy graciosa y muy buena
| LillyStoppable chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Awwwwwwww! Soooo sweet!
| Lewis-Sama chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
This is just the cutiest one-shit EVER!
| Lilly chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
you should make this a two shot and have Shaggy's pov of Velma's sleep-talking; it was really good
| Katyuana chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Awwww. A bit sudden with Velma waking up. I would've preferred seeing Shaggy's perspective of Velma talking in her sleep.
| shippin-itlike-UPS chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
This is so absolutely adorably cute! Love it! "'Elementary, dear Velma', said Fred not taking his eyes off the road. 'You've spilled the beans in your sleep." I love it! :)
| GryffindorSpark chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Haha! I love it! Although, I wish you had included the part when she spilled the beans in your story, it was amazing! Keep up the good work! ;)
| Goggled-eyed Pegasus chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
lol :) i like it you should contuinie
| LeeOfHermes0330 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
So amazing! I looooove Shelma, they're so cute!
| Creepy-Pasta chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Lol I never really got into Scooby Doo, but thanks to this fanfic I'm starting to love it again! X3 So cute and funny.
| LittleMissPanda84 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
Oh my lord, this was so cute! xD It really reminds me of something my best friend would do. (You can actually have a conversation with her while she's sleeping.) :P
Fred's "Elementary, dear Velma" was so perfect. I was laughing so hard and I could practically hear him saying it. lol.
| Critic Number 5 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
You were off to a wonderful start and then you crashed... I lost all interest after Velma wanted to stretch her legs. It was unexpected that she revealed her feelings in her sleep (very nice) but the idea of sleep-talking doesn't bode well with me. It is a rarity among people over the age of 10. I like your attempt at humor in the next to last sentence.