|Reviews for Chance|
| theajsmaster chapter 20 . 3/9
the rape was well discriptive, well done P4perCake
| theajsmaster chapter 16 . 3/9
| Darkdolly chapter 20 . 1/20
I'm so glad you suggested this to me! This was soooooooooooooo fun! Thank you for the story!
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/30/2013
Just out of curiosity...
Could or do you write James x pyramid head?
Or do u just focus on your oc?
(btw wat does oc ooc ect mean?)
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2013
He fell out with kurtus (who looks like sally wtf?) And someone ran over him cutting him into two halves!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
Image laugh so hard If he was a dreaming whial day waz all driving and he fell off the car or whatever day driving on
| Guest chapter 20 . 11/27/2013
Thank you. You really explored and presented something that a lot of people don't know how to. And the fact of the matter is you did it well. Amazingly well. Book worthy in my opion... actually with your permission I'd love to print this out and out it on my shelves. It that's okay with you. is my email. Thanks.
| 2351156 chapter 20 . 10/5/2013
Wow. This story live me speechless. It was great.
| echo2794 chapter 20 . 9/15/2013
I'm sorry I hadn't reviewed for every chapter, but I read this late last night when I was trying to sleep and ended up staying up until 5 am haha. So I was a bit too tired to do so. Either way I can now. This story was pure genius. The emotion was powerful and had my mind reeling. I adored how pyramid heads emotion started with soft hints of lust to hints of attachment until finally hints of affection. You did it perfectly. I love pyramid head but many jump from lust to love too fast which just isn't him. Your transition was flawless and true to character though. Besides all that, it was well written and edited. As a fellow writer I'm thoroughly impressed. Thank you for the hours I spent engulfed in this! It was emotional, intense, frightening, and sexy all in one. I especially loved how boogeyman and the butcher reacted to pyramid and chance as their parents. It was very well expressed. I really loved this story, one of my favorites
| Skywolf-Bailey chapter 20 . 7/10/2013
I loved this! At first i was like wtf? because I was just looking for yaoi and didn't really notice it was silent hill... i now LOVE this pair. -_- I was listening to hopeless by Breaking Benjamin on one part, though, and it fit so perfectly :3. ANYWAYS you are amazing and put so much detail in this, it truly was awesome.
Thanks for the great fanfic! 3 Nowwwww, onwards to the sequel!:D
| lilith dracul chapter 20 . 6/19/2013
Yay fun god I love this story so very twisted and pretty
| lilith dracul chapter 8 . 6/19/2013
| DevilsPuppy chapter 20 . 3/10/2013
this was awsome !
| SaYue-San chapter 20 . 2/28/2013
That was a fucking AWESOME ending. I already knew there was a sequel I read this story 1st cause I didn't wanna ruin it and I was not disappointed :D
You made a really good point about us Silent Hill fans being fucked up and I agree I mean we must have something wrong to keep going back to a place that sometimes has scared the living Crap out of me and this also made me think Maybe we are SUPPOSED to be this fucked up just in case it ever becomes real. I'm not honestly thinking that Silent Hill will ever rise up and try to take over the world but good fucked up people are needed to stop the bad fucked up people perpetrate this kind of shit. I don't know what is right but it just made me think is all.
I will start reading the sequel right now. I may be fucked up but I know what I like AND I LOVE THIS! I love the way you took all the Antagonists from Silent Hill and made them in to one big fucked up family with Chance as the Wife/Mother and even though it is far from your normal situation it worked, really well in fact. I cannot wait to see what you have Seishiro and Chance doing in the next fic (Smut filled or not.) I'm entranced by your take on the Silent Hill Mythology!
| SaYue-San chapter 4 . 2/27/2013
I hope this isn't chances' dream it would be way too easy I feel. I'm loving this story and i'm going to read the rest right NOW I love your twisted sick little mind as it is perfect for writing Silent Hill. You write Pyramid Head so well i'm terrified (well sort of cause i'm used to Silent Hill now been going there ever since the 1st game :D) but it still makes me think which is what a good story/Fan Fic should do. I'm glad it is only gonna get worse because too many Silent Hill fics I have read that fall in to the )Oh PH a is lovely partner( routine but I don't think You will, cause you are like me We KNOW he's evil but we also know he is rightous (To a point) he does what Alessa feels is bad and needs punishing. At least that is how I see it.
Sorry to be boring but expect a lot more feed back from me As I love to tell writers when they write something that makes me feel something. Like Mr Creepy Pasta on You Tube he scares the crap out of me all the time and he never touches Silent hill lol :D KEEP GOING IT'S FREAKING AWESOME :D