Reviews for Strange World for Two Ninja's
paulrocks223 chapter 8 . 10/24/2018
so... gonna update anytime soon it was getting interesting
morphx chapter 8 . 10/7/2018
YOU ASS! HOW COULD YOU END IT THERE!
Guest chapter 8 . 12/23/2016
update
Rubius chapter 2 . 12/21/2016
I'm surprised maka didn't make a big deal about the difference in her/hinata's breast size.
18rLee chapter 4 . 6/12/2015
If you dont like to write lemons then get someone else to do it for you
RoseTheOneForeverUnloved chapter 8 . 3/13/2015
you had to end it their didn't you? *pouting face* i wanted to see lord death get the fuck beat out of him.
RoseTheOneForeverUnloved chapter 3 . 3/13/2015
i have some advice for you if it can help you, i would separate some of the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs so it can be easier to read.
Goody0132 chapter 8 . 10/27/2014
please continue the "Strange World for Two Ninja's" Story
Austin Ga Kill chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
COME ON CLIFFHANGER
MichealMyers chapter 8 . 6/14/2014
I like this book so much I hope that you can write another chapter I am so hoping to see lord death and naruto fight
Guest chapter 8 . 2/9/2014
Dude it benn over a year! where is chapter 9?
with curiosity:. INTHEDARKESTNIGHT
(look me up)
World Maker 777 chapter 8 . 1/9/2014
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!NEXT CHAPTER!
World Maker 777 chapter 5 . 1/8/2014
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
MidnightHunter74 chapter 8 . 11/29/2013
I'm curious on how your going to write out this fight scene, keep it up and i can't wait for the next chapter.
Sao4life chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
Just wonderful just wonderful I can't wait for the fight seen and see who wins and see the how the other people react to this so I hope u update with a fight seen and yea just love this story even more now haha
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