Reviews for 064: Penitent
dairxoxo chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
Wow this was really beautiful thank you for such a amazing story
untapdtreasure chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
This is worded so eloquently. I was left wanting more. And I ache for them both because of their pain.
IHeart2896 chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Really heartfelt. Made me tear up a bit. Good work
RKF22 chapter 1 . 11/25/2012
great job loved it keep it up
jennasushkowitz chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
MY FEELS! this was brilliant and so beautiful.
Ocaso chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
Beautifully written. Well done.


Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
I enjoyed your storie! Great job!, it was a good read!


AJ James
Sofia Bee chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was beautiful. My heart breaks for Bruce. Very nice.
Starving For Attention chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Ohh I really liked this. Very tender. They have such an interesting dynamic.

Short, simple, but enough to make an impact. Great job!
bluecharlotte chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
This was heartbreakingly real. I love that you show how they both feel unworthy. Oh my god it was so angsty! It was addicting. And well written. Well done. :)
brujon chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Angstangstangst! I love it. Beautifully sad, though I think you could have gone into a little more depth relationship-wise.