|Reviews for The Promise|
| krissykitty411 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
this is hilarious! I love how you kept the personality of the characters! please update soon cant wait to see what happens!
| DirectionOnForever chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
Feed me more chapters!... Sorry... I can't control myself when I read an awesome fanfic... Again, I apologize...
| Meghan chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
Dor-15... NOOO! SHE'S GOING TO CORRUPT SARAH'S MIND! ERMAGERD!
| Redsparrow3 chapter 11 . 8/20/2012
You write Wilbur really well with his childish personality! It's amazing :)
Oo oh! Doris! Things just got serious dun dun duuuun!
| ellie111lee chapter 10 . 7/28/2012
WOOOOOOOH! I love this story so much!
| Redsparrow3 chapter 10 . 7/16/2012
Naw poor Anna
I like how you wrote that so you thought he had just confessed he loved Anna and moments later we found out he hadn't (yet!)
| Redsparrow3 chapter 9 . 7/9/2012
Okey dokey :)
Yay im a kitten haha
Wait I'm a bird and a cat...
| Redsparrow3 chapter 8 . 6/27/2012
You are really good at keeping everyone in character :)
I'm also excited as to what's going to happen next
| VCAyuki chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Oh no :( hope anna and wilbur sort things out soon! nice plot
| VCAyuki chapter 7 . 6/24/2012
I can't wait for them to get married x3 nice work
| ErinRosetheWriter chapter 7 . 6/18/2012
This is a great fic! Very realistic, sticking pretty close to character, very good! :) please update!
| Mrs. Frodo Baggins chapter 7 . 6/17/2012
A FEW grammar mistakes here and there... but hey? Who doesn't? Keep at this story!
| Redsparrow3 chapter 7 . 6/17/2012
Interesting! Anna is getting jealous, I found Wilbur's reaction to Sarah funny XD
| Redsparrow3 chapter 6 . 6/10/2012
In this part you really captured everyone's personality:
"Oh," Lewis smiled and ran his fingers though his blond hair. "Thanks."
Wilbur groaned loudly. "Boring!" He grabbed Anna's hand and pulled her towards the door. "Come on Anna lets go do something that is actually fun."
He froze and turned around to Lewis. "Hey, don't tell mom ok."
It was awesome :)
| Redsparrow3 chapter 5 . 6/6/2012
Happy Birthday :)