Reviews for The Promise
NewRandomChild01 chapter 11 . 4/14
Both cousins: AGAIN?!
Fafa: Dude, your computer sucks. It posted our review before we could finish!
RandomChild:(sighs admiringly at the despised lump of metal) I know, I am so proud of it's rebellious ways. ANYWAY, Doris is THE sneakiest, evilest, and the cutest Helping Hat in the WORLD!
Fafa: Doris sounds like someone I know...(Looks at RandomChild)
RandomChild: I DO NOT WANT TO TAKE OVER TODAYLAND! But now that I think about it...
;-)! TOTALLY AWESOME! WE WOULDN'T KILL YOU FOR ANY REASON OTHER THAN IF SARAH TAKES WILBUR AWAY FROM ANNA! For some reason, I picture Anna as the Anna from the movie FROZEN...Is that weird?
Anyways, KEEP WRITING, IT IS SOSOSOSOSOSOSO AWESOME!
-NewRandomChild01 & FafaDragons13
P.S. SORRY FOR THE LAST UNFINISHED REVIEW! RandomChild's computer sucks.
NewRandomChild01 chapter 11 . 4/14
RandomChild: DOSJEVDUCFJTGOPQKABBDJCKSHJ...! AHHHHH, AUTHOR I FEEL YOU! I LOVE DORIS AND I KNOW IT IS WRONG, BUT I CAN'T HEEELLLPP IIITT!(fangirls in her chair)
Fafa: (rolls her eyes) Calm down, cuz, but who's Doris?
RandomChild: Only THE sneakiest,evilest,
krissykitty411 chapter 11 . 5/11/2013
this is hilarious! I love how you kept the personality of the characters! please update soon cant wait to see what happens!
DirectionOnForever chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
Feed me more chapters!... Sorry... I can't control myself when I read an awesome fanfic... Again, I apologize...
Meghan chapter 11 . 1/11/2013
Dor-15... NOOO! SHE'S GOING TO CORRUPT SARAH'S MIND! ERMAGERD!
Redsparrow3 chapter 11 . 8/20/2012
You write Wilbur really well with his childish personality! It's amazing :)
Oo oh! Doris! Things just got serious dun dun duuuun!
:)
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
ellie111lee chapter 10 . 7/28/2012
WOOOOOOOH! I love this story so much!
Redsparrow3 chapter 10 . 7/16/2012
Naw poor Anna
I like how you wrote that so you thought he had just confessed he loved Anna and moments later we found out he hadn't (yet!)
Great chapter
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Redsparrow3 chapter 9 . 7/9/2012
Okey dokey :)
Won't leave!
Yay im a kitten haha
Meow
Sincerely, Redsparrow3
Wait I'm a bird and a cat...
Redsparrow3 chapter 8 . 6/27/2012
You are really good at keeping everyone in character :)

I'm also excited as to what's going to happen next

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
VCAyuki chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Oh no :( hope anna and wilbur sort things out soon! nice plot
VCAyuki chapter 7 . 6/24/2012
I can't wait for them to get married x3 nice work
ErinRosetheWriter chapter 7 . 6/18/2012
This is a great fic! Very realistic, sticking pretty close to character, very good! :) please update!
Mrs. Frodo Baggins chapter 7 . 6/17/2012
A FEW grammar mistakes here and there... but hey? Who doesn't? Keep at this story!
Redsparrow3 chapter 7 . 6/17/2012
Interesting! Anna is getting jealous, I found Wilbur's reaction to Sarah funny XD

Awesome

Sincerely, Redsparrow3
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