|Reviews for Lil red riding mari|
| The Universe Within chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
Lmfao made my day!
| ShadowWalker323 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
Improve your grammar
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
XD wolfre, wilfre
| Kawaii Johnson chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
I want a pet Wolfre. I wold name it Wilfre. XD
| Nothereatall1234567890 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I hope you notice that the website rules strictly say that all pieces of work musthave proper grammar and spelling.
Second, you can't escape criticism. Its what makes you learn, and grow better. You can't learn from mistakes if they are not pointed out.
Third, much of it does not make sense. The grammar and spelling are just part of the issue. They prevent clarity... I cannot understand what is going on most the time...
However, the parts I could understand were a very good take on the story. Please take my suggestions with love, as I mean them to be taken.