|Reviews for Until You Believe|
| Faybian chapter 14 . 3/15/2014
I've only recently found this website and I LOVE this story! But is this really the end? I hope one day you write more...pleeease ;-)
| Elle chapter 14 . 3/8/2014
Updates? pls :)
| PiercedStarling89 chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
holy hell. loved this & loved his point of view. Hope you continue & if not send me a pm. I'd love to see it finished.
| TIFF chapter 14 . 11/6/2013
I typically don't beg but please please please continue with this story! I really love it and in dying to know what happens next!
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/19/2013
Please give us more?
| Jessa chapter 14 . 4/2/2013
Any new chapters...?
| isadomi chapter 14 . 3/18/2013
Nice story I can't wait for the next update
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/16/2013
Great chapter! I love your writing. So glad to see you back!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/15/2013
Very happy to see this story updated! Loved this last chapter! Can't wait to see how Jordan & Angela enjoy their night together!
| Jody Barsch chapter 14 . 3/16/2013
Glad to see an update :) I really liked the choice to move past the fight at the start and just recap. Definitely wanted more, but liked how the last line ended. Also liked the "Who?" I questioned playfully. "You?" bit.
| Knotty Ink chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Absolutely love this story. Please keep going.
| moriahhh chapter 14 . 3/15/2013
Great chapter! Love getting the update:)
| 3girlsmom chapter 14 . 3/15/2013
You are going to END this chapter like THAT!? askajfdidjfoiajeklkcmadoksja oife!
When will you update this again!? Oh My favorite! Angela and Jordan forever! Love the chemistry between them, the innocence, the whole thing!
Love you Mary! Thanks for Updating!
| TheOnceAnonymous14 chapter 14 . 3/15/2013
Wow, it's been awhile! :) Very nice update! Jordan and his sibling interaction is sweet. I can't wait to see what happens between him and Angela! ;)
| Jody Barsch chapter 13 . 9/19/2012
Best one yet, really well written. (Hope Angela doesn't get too mad.)
Some great lines:
"She was seeking her own form of release, even if she didn't know it. A release that I was more than willing to give her if she'd just let me..."
"Ever since that day, the day she went home with me, we'd pushed her boundaries. ... Together, we tested her limits."
"wishing I could remove this barrier between us and lose myself in her"
"As much as I wanted to push her limits, I didn't want to push her away."