Reviews for Her Future King
ro781727 chapter 21 . 8/4/2016
What was the point of making Merlin royalty if she gave her kingdom up? She and Arthur could have ruled BOTH kingdoms!
K.Daniels chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
Don't get me wrong, I love this. But it is so weird to think of Merlin as a girl! AH! But I love it so far. :)
OnlyTheMusic chapter 21 . 7/21/2015
This is overall a great story with a unique plot, but I do feel the need to point one thing out. That thing is the conflict. I only skimmed the second half of the story to see if it got better, and it didn't. Throughout "Her Future King", problems seem to vanish to move the rest of the story along. For example, Merlin isn't a strong enough ruler by herself, so she gets married and the people who thought she was weak stopped fighting her. Uther won't let Arthur get married, so he moves to Cambia to marry Merlin and automatically feels like Cambia is his home after living there for a week (as opposed to 26 years of living in Camelot with his friends and family). Merlin and Arthur have a daughter first, and her rule would be contested judging by the other kingdoms' reaction to Merlin becoming queen, but that's completely fine since Arthur is just glad she exists. But I hope I didn't come off as offensive with this review, because I really do respect your (and the other fanfiction authors') courage in posting your work online for the world to see.
Braget chapter 21 . 8/16/2014
Beautiful. I usually dont read fem merlin stories. But im happy I read this one. I LOVED IT! *jumps up and down in childish manner* "YAY WANT MORE!"
AsorenRM chapter 21 . 6/29/2014
I really liked how fluffy it was. The love sparked between the two was amazing. They fit like peanut butter and jelly.
Compliment Giver chapter 21 . 5/26/2014
What I love the most about this story is that Cambia is the spanish word for "change". That added a new layer to the story for me.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 19 . 1/5/2014
Why didn't Merlin take action with her own magic? And I thought she was supposed to be helping, how could things have gone so badly? You did see what Merlin did in the final battle of the series, right?
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 15 . 1/5/2014
Merlin doesn't swear, in the original or any other fan fic I've read, including yours up to this point. So why did you have her swear?
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 14 . 1/5/2014
She wouldn't have been bored, she would have been preparing for war! She is the queen after all. She should be stressed to the max, not bored.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 11 . 1/5/2014
great detail with the hand fastening, although that first bit about who was holding what crown was very confusing.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 9 . 1/5/2014
This seems way too smooth of sailing right now. There's not a lot of conflict to make it interesting.
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
I think Arthur would need to tell the smith what he wanted. Perhaps he could give the smith a drawing or something?
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
I like that you make Arthur shallow in the beginning. It gives his character room to grow.
LaRieNGuBleR chapter 21 . 12/20/2013
I rarely read the female-Merlin fic, but I read this and it's a nice and cute story. :)
crazzyredhead chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
This was a great story and I loved it.
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