Reviews for A Street With No End
Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2012
Edward does have a mess on his hands, but he is willing to go to jail because he feels guilty.
Someone at the hostpital must have told Charlie that Edward was with Bella when she came in...

Please...we need more...
Guest chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
THis is so sad. Did Edward fall asleep at the he responsible for the death of Bella's brother. I need to know more...
JayNahNah chapter 4 . 8/29/2012
That's what I love about your's like spider web...slowly drawing you in until you're trapped. Great job!
sassygirl156 chapter 4 . 8/26/2012
All I can say about this is "frickin wow"! I don't think I've read this type of plot before-yes, Edward really's got a mess on his hands. I'm going to cross my fingers and hope there is more to the accident than him falling asleep at the wheel. It's heartbreaking-one child lost and another seriously injured.
I often wonder how doctors manage the incredibly long shifts they sometimes work, especially interns. My daughter is planning to become some type of doctor-I often remind her it is one hella long journey that is in no way easy. I cringe to think this kind of thing can happen. So, so sad.
Yes, poor Charlie. I suspect when he was learning more about the accident he was told who the other driver was. It seems logical that could happen. I doubt anyone "ratted him out." At least at the moment.
Can't wait to see where you're taking this!
georgiaedwardlover chapter 4 . 8/25/2012
I am hooked. Totally hooked. I just got a chance to look at this. It's been sitting in my inbox since you started releasing it.
A very, very sensitive Edward... and I love a sensitive, responsible Edward.
Your medical stuff is spot-on... and I hate it when people screw up medical stuff.
Please keep on. This is great.
K chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
Great story
bookwormlove chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
can't wait for the next chapter!
SLKerouac chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
Edward is at the hospital. He is in Bella's room and Charlie comes in. Edward doesn't know how to tell him that he caused the accident. Did he really cause the accident and only thinks that he did? Did soemthing else cause it? He tells Rose that he did. She is upset wan wants to call her father. Edward says no. She's mad and then goes to work. Edward goes back to the hospital even though he sick. What does Charlie know about the accident? What did happen? Does Edward even know what happened? Next chapter!
kammiya chapter 3 . 8/19/2012
really cool story, you should totally continue with this story...
It's really interesting reading how Edward copes with the guilt and I can't wait for some ExB interaction.
VB4ECULLEN chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Serious sobs :'( Ah, so many conflicting emotions! Love it... If that's an inappropriate thing to say then... Keep writing! :) xxx
RTP4ME chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Oh my god
My heart has been in my throat this whole 4 chapters.
You've painted a wall of such different emotions.
This is so hard. The guilt out weighs any punishment I can think of. To survive things like this is so much harder than not.
Im scared to know what's next but can't wait to find out.
edward-n-bella-fr-eternity1207 chapter 4 . 8/19/2012
Terribly sad! Amazing job! I cannot wait for more so update real soon! Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
EnchantedbyTwilight chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Dr. Newton? I hurt for Edward - and Charlie and Bella... so sad and you write it so well!
sharkjumper chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
charlie saw ed cry...?
slc6548 chapter 4 . 8/17/2012
Good chapter.
That's just so sad! Feel for Charlie and for Edward.
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