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Fanatic97 chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
5 satrs dude 5 stars great story
Sounddrive chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Oh Optimus . . . this is so dark, & sad! T0T
TheChippedCup chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
That was so sad. But I loved it! I'm a horrible person...but you have amazing writing! I feel so bad now...I seriously thought that little girl was going to survive somehow! But no...her teddy did...

I'm going to go crawl in a hole and cry my eyeballs out now...
Random Reader chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Lambor Terror Lep chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Very touching story well done good work.
redconvoy chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
The only thing I could think of while reading this story was, that little girl probably would have wished she stayed asleep. That was, well, something, but realistic in that universe. Very well written, I'll say that. Will there be more?
AutobotGuy710 chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Such a sad little ficlet. But so perfectly written, I love it! :D
Foxbear chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Sad and touching.

This is a well written piece that I could easily see happening in the show if the writers were willing to get that dark.

Looking forward to more.
MISCrasyaboutfanfics chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Very sad but very well written. :(