Reviews for Lola
Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
*quibble* This is everything I wanted. Thank you.
Haraku chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Awesome sauce. This story was wildly awesome! i have no tips to give to a young writer in like forever.(even though i'm younger.)But i'm still awesomer!
A Markov chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
This is definitely one of those "that could totally happen, why isn't it an option?" scenarios. Nicely framed and executed. One point of info- The "XO" is actually the second officer in the chain of command, the Executive Officer. Sheppard would be the "CO" or "Commanding Officer."
owelpost chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
Holy crap balls! This was fantastic. Brilliantly written. It has an amazing impact for such a short story, reaffirming to me that you are a master of your craft. Come back soon, ya hear?
The Allusive Man chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Great banter, great chemistry. Smokin' hot!
Fixative chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
man! you could hook me on pretty much anything. so much chemistry in such a short space. :0
Fox.House chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Awesome! Again your writing is the best! I would have to agree that James was a tease which holds no fruit. What were they thinking? Please keep up the wonderful delicious brain bliss, please!
Quilate chapter 1 . 5/19/2012

Totally. Yeah. Bioware, why ? :(((