Reviews for Cherry Blossom Temptation
Alpenwolf chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
Hahaha, Hinata having to mate so hard until her partner passes out ... that seems to require some sort of training for her
Ichihime forever chapter 3 . 4/15/2013
Awesome chapter nice Mother/Daughter scene can't wait to see what other tasks that are in store for Hinata and seeing if she'll fuck Ten-Ten or another girl.
QBause chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
Work hard Play hard that's all Hinata have to do. Sex for progress!
AVP5 chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
Impressive work as always and it seems hinata is off on a mission. And what else does this woman have plan for hinata? Update when you got time please.
naruto11222 chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
Love the chapter. Update soon
ilovetoph4eva chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
Nice story, I like the way you write and I'm happy to find some nice futa fics which are actually written well. I would write futa myself if I could write lemon scenes to save my life.

As for which of your ideas I think you should pursue next?

I'm not 100% sure, but if you've watched Avatar the Last Airbender, then please use that universe. If you haven't watched it, then Naruto is fine too.

Ø A future female soldier gets captured by her Futanari enemy.
- This would work for both Naruto and ATLA
Ø The daily life of a high school Futa and her girlfriend.
- This just sounds quite interesting, and you could use characters from either of the shows.
Ø A Futa pirate captain captures a princess then gets sucked into an adventure.
- I don't know if you're interested, but I think you could write a good long fic with this one, incorporating characters from just a bunch of other fics.

I'm just curious, what exactly happens in collaborations, I don't really know since I've never done one, so I'm curious about the smaller details. And as far as the last story suggestion goes, if you don't want to, could I nick that idea and maybe have a go at writing it? Of course I'd totally credit you for coming up with the idea.

Regards,
naruto11222 chapter 2 . 1/8/2013
great story
jus here to help chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
this whole story is awesome please oh please oh please make more chapters and just at least if you can, can you make the chapters go at least to 10 please and im not gonna keep acting fanboy-ish but yeah you did great and i think this i hands down the best naruto fanfic ever and trust i read alot oh and one last thing can you teach me how to make fanfiction ? good job with this chapter ( fav part if you wanna get bigger you gotta cum lots ) lol
Alpenwolf chapter 2 . 1/3/2013
hinata for once being a pervert, and if this goes she is going to rival jiraiya xd
Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
You don't see Hinata as the main character, keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Kybris chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Always nice to see fanfic writers who know how the hell English works. Us grammar Nazis salute you.

I would like to suggest a Neon Genesis Evangelion futa lemon, please. I've seen it done.
ElVeneciano chapter 2 . 12/4/2012
Hey! great work, a very nice story! this story should be translated into other languages, if you wish, i can translate the fic to spanish, now, this story..to Favorites! you are a good writer!
Negi Atsui chapter 2 . 11/29/2012
Wow, a futa story with Hinata as main, not alot of those here. Add a femNaru and it'll be perfect
Guest chapter 2 . 11/28/2012
awesome please continue as fast as possible
Guest chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
interesting story! i love it! i hope hinata convinces sakura and her mom to eat each other out til they squirt before she has sex with them both.

please continue writing!
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