Nice mutual seduction between the two.

Your Brittany is lovely.

I like the pacing of their interaction.

please try to update soon this is my FAVOURIT fanfic EVER

This is a fun pov to have. I like your Brittany. Much more than most of them. I really like how you describe her mannerisms and demeanor.

Re-read this. Thank you for sharing this story with us. Really awesome. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Ah fuck. This story is so bittersweet, God. I don't know if you're answering to reviews, but I'm still gonna ask - do you know how many chapters this story's gonna have? Please update soon :)

I've been listening to the song while reading it and I would want Naya to sing this.

I miss this fic! So, so much!

Hello
So, um, read your story. The way you portray your characters while adding in realistic detail about the military makes the story... flow. It makes it seem real, like you could picture it in your head that the soldiers are just standing there in the sun, nervous about deployment. Its a very... heartwrenching way you write the emotions. Great job.

Um, for suggestions, I just have one idea. Could you maybe label the POV when you switch? I mean, I just think it would make it a little easier for the reader to get whose eyes we're seeing it through. Idk, might be just me, lol.

Also... not to be rude, but with your gf, and the whole army thing... if you ever want to like, idk, talk to me about it, or just rant about how much your life may or may not suck, my PM is always open, okay?

So yeah, great job on this fic, and have a great week! I wish you and your gf luck as you guys go throughout life...
Don't let the bad things in life get you down! Thank you so much for writing this!

J. Nihilum

This story has had me whipped for almost 2 years now. That is all

I love this story. In fact, I just finished rereading it. I'm not usually one who will go back and reread an entire story without skipping through at least some bits (mostly due to time restraints), but I find that I just can't resist rereading the entire story with this one. It's just a great read. It's fun to go back and find little details that I missed the first, or second, time through. Thank you for explaining the military jargon so well; it helps a lot. Additionally, thank you for posting this story. I really enjoy it, and I really appreciate your sharing it.

I understand who you are writing this for and I think I understand why. I guess it would be hard to write about things you are trying to "wash away". I appreciate every upload you do, it truly is an amazing story. I hope at the end you find you closure and you feel at ease. Thank you for updating and letting us experience this story

Hi,

Wish you could continue. I like the story written from the heart and I feel it.

I want to know what happen to Quinn. I think Quinn is my favorite character.

Wish you can finish what you have started.

I honestly don't think I can express what this fic means to me in words. Maybe if I had your skills it would be possible. I just wanted you to know that I wholeheartedly love this story. Every time I have a terrible day or memories of bad times that I just can't shake, I read a few chapters of this fic and it takes me to another world. It helps me smile, get excited, feel and hope for the characters you've developed. Thank you. Thank you very much for putting this story into the universe, and I hope it's helping you by writing it, as much as it's helped me by reading it.

THIS is UNreal unreal i tell you .
but in a good way.
hope you update soon.

Awh! I mean wow, what can I say...this story is truly amazing, every aspect and detail is superbly written...In all honesty I thank you whole heartedly for writing this:) Everything and I mean everything in this story completely consumed me from the very first chapter...You have a way and elegance with words that encourage me to think, reflect and feel:) This is thoroughly powerful read that really in all essence of the word really you so much for writing this:)