Reviews for Unprofessional
Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2014
Yes, god forbid the intrusion of plot here! We might actually get characters who aren't just pathetic, lifeless fuckbunnies! The horror! *faints dead away*

Seriously tho, not even a hint of Roxas's life outside of his desire to screw Axel? Hobby? Favorite sport? Mother's maiden name? Why should I care about Roxas being treated like a blow up doll? He doesn't seem to mind, and honestly, I find that a stretch to understand. I guess it's good that Roxas doesn't mind tho, because then this would be blackmaily and rapey and that might actually lead to something interesting and substantive. PWP Shmee-WP. Your writing can be really good and engaging and compelling, but every other story is glorified porn with no meaningful conflict to drive the story
VendettaWho chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
In the beginning, I was thinking, "Why am I reading this" over and over again, because it was making me so sad that Roxas wasn't being loved, he was being used, and I didn't like that. But, I'm glad I continued reading, because it ended with so much love. God, I love it. You'll be hearing from me again soon, so ta-ta for now :)
Chriss-Meister chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Omg, Roxy, you little whore-cake XD
EchoSkies chapter 3 . 11/17/2013
May I say that this story deserves an award for best Axel x Roxas lemon scenes. -hands trophy-
KH freak 813 chapter 3 . 10/20/2013
That's great to know that they had a happy ending.
KH freak 813 chapter 2 . 10/20/2013
How could Roxas bear that sort of treatment?
KH freak 813 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Wow, Axel's cold. How could someone like Roxas love him?
The Orgasmic Uke chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
God i LOVE me some porn with plot. It's not good if there's not a little plot to it. I thought poor wittle roxas was going to get his ehart broken but NOPE. Axel's not the bastard he seemed. That made me happy. Well done as always
FiggThe3rd chapter 3 . 8/27/2013
I've read this like 2 or 3 times now and still love it! I actually searched for it cause I wanted to read it again :)
PandoraMagic chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
The last chap was so cute. I can't. -go hides-
Axel's Twin chapter 3 . 6/21/2013
Woah! Sexiest fic ever! That was amazing! Great plot line... I like a little plot, no much... but some.. ;)
Great job!
Thanks for the fic!
-Samantha
ijustliketoread43 chapter 3 . 4/14/2013
thank god i changed in this last chapter... i didnt want it to just be about fucking... loved the way you wrote this.
NessaYume chapter 3 . 2/13/2013
All I can say.. Is wow..
Kaitybaby123 chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Your My favorite writer ever ;3! Please write more!
Spittfyre chapter 3 . 8/18/2012
Another new favorite! I know I'm throwing that word around a lot lately, but /you/ just keep throwing out these irresistibly delicious stories! I don't know how you do it - this whole thing was sexy as hell, probably the hottest thing I've ever read, but somehow still managed to make me go "D'awww" at the end! *heart*

Roxas was just so sexy-cute with his unabashed honesty! Plus I adored his "sir"s! :P Although I did feel a bit bad that the lil' guy had to compare himself with his feminine competition and had such an understandably hard time expecting anything serious from his kinky bastard of a boss... Speaking of, I had to laugh at Axel's initial reaction upon finding an intern in that state, his frank response with the whole scenario - "May I see you in my office?" lol Poor, poor Roxas! XD But maybe I shouldn't feel too bad for him after the way things ended up
I really loved the whole thing, but I'm so glad it finished with them happy together! *sucker for sweet endings*

And so this was an incentive for voting? How did you /not/ get swamped with votes for this?
Best.
Prize.
Ever!
Although I guess I don't deserve it's sexiness. D: It's such a shame that your shelter didn't win this time around. :( It is still going on though isn't it? I tried to see who ended up winning, but it looks like voting continues until next month. Unless I'm looking at something else...? *head scratch* If that is the case though, this is one crazy long contest! It's pretty obvious why daily drabbles would be impossible. XD I remember that pepsi grant though, hope that's helping you guys and all the animals!
*votes anyways*
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