Reviews for The Spirit Within: Part One: The Water Tribe Child
yapheh chapter 36 . 6/27
I already reviewed but didn't leave my username...
Again, great insight into characters and believable emotions
The King in White chapter 41 . 6/1


That ending was super painful mang. Well written all in all. Very glad to read it. I'd just recommend you re-write the summary of your fic though. This is a great work, but the poor punctuation in the summary makes it look like it wouldn't be. I was put off reading it many times because of that, until I took the risk and saw how great it was.
paulina101 chapter 41 . 1/21
I have been reading this for 3 days straight, and it is now 4:30 in the morning that I have finished part 1 of this amazing story. There are no words to describe how I'm feeling but just know that you are a genius. And I love you for creating something so amazingly beautiful.
RedScotch444 chapter 41 . 11/23/2014
Amazing Finale! Please do like, ten sequels! :D
RedScotch444 chapter 40 . 11/23/2014
Aw, that's so shi*tty of Ozai. Oh well!
RedScotch444 chapter 39 . 11/22/2014
Gr8 job!
RedScotch444 chapter 38 . 11/22/2014
Don't make him lose, don't make him lose, don't- Oh. He lost, didn't he?
RedScotch444 chapter 35 . 11/22/2014
Banish AZULA!
RedScotch444 chapter 30 . 11/20/2014
Hmm... I think Ozai sent Ursa to kill Azulon, or else he would kill Zuko. Then, Ozai banished Ursa.
RedScotch444 chapter 26 . 11/20/2014
I would compliment your work, however, there is the small fact that your stories are always perfect.

Keep up the (undefined) chapters!
RedScotch444 chapter 24 . 11/20/2014
*squeaks in excitement* Can't wait for the next scene!
RedScotch444 chapter 22 . 11/20/2014
Zuko's falling in love! :D
RedScotch444 chapter 21 . 11/19/2014
Iroh as Fire Lord! Now your talking about plot twists!
RedScotch444 chapter 19 . 11/19/2014
Please kill Azula? Pleeeaaaaasee...?
RedScotch444 chapter 18 . 11/19/2014
Can't wait! :D
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