Reviews for Aftermath
Cassandra30 chapter 12 . 3/30/2015
Keep thinking Fornell.
Cassandra30 chapter 11 . 3/30/2015
Dearing is a psychopath.
Cassandra30 chapter 10 . 3/30/2015
I am not sure if I need to rip Admiral McGee an new one or what. Some men just shouldn't marry and have families. As for Dearing ... grief is not an excuse.
Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 3/30/2015
Well done, Tim.
Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 3/30/2015
Most excellent!
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 3/30/2015
Excellent!
Cassandra30 chapter 6 . 3/30/2015
Well researched. Very realistic story!
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 3/30/2015
Love the father's thoughts.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 3/30/2015
Awesome!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 3/30/2015
Wonderful!
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 3/30/2015
Excellent! Nicely handled, Heather.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 3/30/2015
Superb!
fighttowin1 chapter 35 . 1/9/2015
I really enjoyed reading this story. I might even have read it when it first came out and may even have reviewed it then. Obviously it's been long enought that I enjoyed reading it again as I was expecting certain things to happen but couldn't remember whether I had actually read it or was just simply expecting it. I really enjoyed the humor that was twisted throughout...you've got the characters down perfectly. Moments that have stuck out in my mind as being my favorite...:
the head tap to Timmy that barely moved his hair.
Tony's statement of him wanting to see Tim ask Gibb's what his father's intentions are
Strganoff, Dad, really?
He's got that much control over them? Nope, they've got that much faith in him.
Jimmy did an outstanding job! I really liked how his new father in-law came with him and got to see Jimmy be a good, dedicated, honorable man take control of a horrible situation and do his job. I loved how he asserted himself and got the both of them from Florida to begin with and how Vance had a helicopter waiting...and here he had thought his son in-law was just a wimpy guy that worked as an autopsy gremlin. lol...okay so maybe not the gremlin part. He probably did think that it wasn't that much different from his own profession...I loved how his eyes were opened to the massive difference. WELL DONE!
There are many spots of humor that I really enjoyed. I do hope that you will some day come back and finish this story. I'm looking forward to seeing if Dearing gets his hand on any of the others...like Tony maybe? (lol...I enjoy Tony wump) before they catch him.
Even if you don't finish it, I really enjoyed it, thank you so much for sharing it with us. If you do finish it, I'm sure that it will be great! :-)
Thank you for taking the time to share with us!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 35 . 11/24/2014
Ooooooo! very nice! I still don't have you worked out yet. you are either in the health sciences, close to someone who is, or you are just VERY good at research. ?The planning you put into this is brilliant! Well done.
Guest chapter 35 . 10/13/2014
I like this story and where you have taken it. It's been awhile since there has been an update, hope someday you'll come back to this one.
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