|Reviews for 5 Troubles In Paradise|
| oldtime chapter 7 . 11/4/2012
that was a good one
| oldtime chapter 6 . 11/4/2012
i think he gave him something to think about
| oldtime chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
if he could only, remember how much he didn't want the punishment before he did things he knew better then to do.
| oldtime chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
I don't think Billy, will like tangling with Ethan, but I bet he does.
| FanofGibbs68 chapter 7 . 7/3/2012
I loved the chicken idea. I could just see those chickens returned without feathers. Wonderful chapter!
| gaben chapter 7 . 6/14/2012
A great update. I can see them all heading for trouble. Like the way you handled Billy, quite a sad story really.
| Sierra Rose 22 chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
I like how Billy and Joseph are becoming friends and Billy is turning over a new leaf to behave better. Little ears shouldn't be listening, I guess he sure heard the wrong thing about the bank! Those poor chickens losing all their feathers! LOL
Yes, Joseph, I think you are very smart to not fall into the boys upcoming adventures. Course I know boys and they probably will talk you into it. Oh dear.
| Valerie chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
don't worry ! as the chapter is long, reading it is a best pleasure !
poor kids with a lot of imagination but always caught and been in trouble !
I really love how Ethan and Mitch take care of kids in all ways (when they listen explanation, when they help or when they give punishment) !
sorry about my poor english... it's easier for me to read than to write...
bye and ready fort the next... waiting it, I will read again this chapters.
| TRUMAN'S SHELL chapter 7 . 6/12/2012
Another great chapter. Those boys just can't seem to stay out of trouble :) I'm glad Clare and Rob are waiting to get married. They are way too young.
| Valerie chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
many thanks for your message !
I really love this new story ! Mitch was right to discipline Billy !
regards from France !
| gaben chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
Ben, boy he just can't stay out of trouble. Good conversation between Tom and Ethan. Mitch handled young billy fairly too. Nice bit if bacground and character insights too. Love motivation plausible on a narrative .
| TRUMAN'S SHELL chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
Good for Mitch taking Billy into hand. The boy needed it. I loved when Mitch told Joseph that he would never make it as a spy :)
I'm also glad that Ethan realized that he hurt Joseph's pride and feelings. I have a feeling the Joseph would have rebelled, well so did Ethan.
Finally, I loved that Ethan went to Tom and asked for advice. It would be much easier for people to hold onto pride instead of allowing people to help them.
Great Chapter :)
| Sierra Rose 22 chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
Good for you, Joseph, for telling those boys you aren't interested in learning to shoot. Of course I think the thought of the strap may be a good incentive. LOL I like how you are developing Mitch. I think he did the right thing with Billy as his pa seems not to be too worried about him drinking and gambling. Maybe now he will think twice about staying out of the bars until he is old enough. Enjoying this story!
| FanofGibbs68 chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
I am glad that Billy has someone to direct him. Mitch cares about him and knows he needs guidance. I'm glad Ethan is being patient with the boys and listening to their explanations. He seems to be gaining a good balance. Super job!
| bonanza4life chapter 6 . 6/7/2012
I get the feeling Joseph may not listen to Ethan no matter how he explains why he needs to not intervene with the bank robbers. Glad Mitch took Billy in hand. I like your character of Mitch! Keep up the good work.