|Reviews for Highschool Hell|
| Aoi Awanoumi chapter 6 . 4/20
OMGIEEE I LOVE ITTT CHAMIKO 4LYFE YO 3
PLEASE CONTINUE IT I LOVE ITTT
| xsasuhinax chapter 6 . 11/23/2013
Lol you might want to fix that insult with wuya previously before. You mentioned that she couldn't read when there was no context tp be read in any situation. It is like euya asking the same question to kimiko, but while she is eating and kimiko says'cant you read that i am eating'. Also i like hannibal blushing, even if he does get dished, it would be strangely nice at the end of the fanfic for it to be..i woukdnt say reconciliation or truce but more of a 'you were right. I am sorry and thanks for helping me when i really need it' situation. Know what i have not seen yet? A haniko fanfic, weird but hard to not think about it a little.
| Amanda chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
I love this story it has a good plot and your a really good writer I can't wait for the next chapter please update soon!
| elbowwwo chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
I'm still waiting for the next chapter, you know? :)
| Nicole chapter 6 . 4/22/2013
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAS E CONTINUE I LOVE IT
| Andreeaxx chapter 6 . 3/6/2013
| theangelkneesocks chapter 6 . 9/23/2012
omg please update
| Guest chapter 6 . 8/7/2012
Awsome! Is there another chapter for this story?
| woodlandfairykirk chapter 6 . 7/29/2012
Aww this is adorable! And I totally understand Kimiko, since I also get hurt a lot in gym(:
| Random Person chapter 6 . 6/4/2012
(Just continuing what I wrote down, accidentally send it by accident, forgot the "In all due respect")
And to tell you the truth, if you get offended about this, I can't say that I'm honestly surprised. Everybody needs a critic, and sometimes constructive criticism never works, especially since I see you making some snappy comeback and not really bothering to consider what other people are saying, unless it's like some fan of yours who think that your stories are "100% perfect." (You say you do, but I don't see that you bother to try, especially since your writing says it all)
Yeah...I'm also noticing that I'm sounding harsh now, but I do hope you get the point now. But it doesn't mean that you're an awful writer. And like a wise man once said, "A master of something was once an amateur themselves." So, I'm not saying that there isn't an hope for you, but you don't try listening to these hardcore critics, then you won't get anywhere. Trust me, they know what they're doing, they done these things once, and want to make sure that they have another potential writers like you learn the same thing so that you can do just as good, or maybe even better than what they did...They also learned the hard way too.
But I do like your stories though, but I just notices that your slacking off with the character's personalities. And just because you have fans, and that you like to alter the characters in some ways, it doesn't mean you should completely change the main parts of the characters that SPECIFICALLY MAKES THEM UNIQUE, DISTINCTIVE, AND ORIGINAL.
So, if you do consider this and try to make them as in character as they can be, then that's great! You should try to make the characters somewhat different without ruining their original and special characteristics that make them who they are.
Or if you're just gonna dismiss this as some trash, because it overall message is just too harsh for you and that you can't take it. Then...Well then...Meh, it's your choice.
| Random Person chapter 6 . 6/4/2012
Really? I read this story, and I got something to say
-with lots of sarcasm- I just LOVE how Chase Young is suppose to be an arrogant jerk, but he never once was arrogant to Kimiko, because HE. JUST. LOVES. HER! Oh, and that out of ALL of the girls that "cool, but mean and arrogant kid" Chase Young would choose, he would instantly choose the "weird girl who don't care about what people thinks about thinks about her" just because she's special!
I don't know what fantasy world you live in, but these things are beyond overrated stories and just doesn't happen. Especially not with "cool kid" Chase just simply "falling in love with a weird Kimiko and not be worried about his reputation and not even a bit hesitant to do this." -shakes head in disappoint-
I know this is AU, and I've read your other stories (Expect for the Rated M ones, I wouldn't even DARE to read them...Just... -shudders-).
But just reading this story and how I notice that Chase was suppose to be this jerk, and how he just isn't, because he's oh-so-in-love with Kimiko is kinda sickening, and extremely OOC.
And yeah, even though we don't have an entire grasp on how the characters act like and that we don't know them completely JUST BECAUSE WE DIDN'T MAKE THEM, it doesn't mean that you can't try to make them as in character as you can. I'm not saying that you've never grasp the character's personalities well before, it's that you're losing your touch on how they act like, up to the point where we don't even know if they ARE Chase and Kimiko -and the others characters too-, or some sappy, corny, and utterly cliche people who just thinks that they're the characters of Xiaolin Showdown.
(Plus, Christy Hui tries to show the character's personalities as original and unique as it is: Like Chase actually BEING an arrogant -but hot- jerk and Kimiko...Why would she even like Jack, much less go out with him, doesn't she think that he's some goth creep? -And when did she ever think that he's cool, honestly?-)
And all due respect, if you get offended about this, I can't say that I'm honestly surprised. Everybody needs a critic, and sometimes constructive criticism never works, especially since I see you making some snappy comeback and not really bothering to c
| Evil Cupcake chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
Please update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens next :D
| RaixKimxChase chapter 5 . 5/25/2012
| Raixkimxchase chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
MORE MORE MORE!
But with chamiko
| Coralline Slayer chapter 3 . 5/21/2012
Nawww, poor Kimi!
I love how adorkable Jack was in this chapter, with his fist pumping! Cuteness!
This story's great; Chase and Kim better get together in the end-after beating Hannibal to a pulp of course!