Man, that was intense, but really good! I ship Maria and Loki so much~

Oh dear friggering God.

I'm honestly at loss for words. You pretty much stole my words

Well this was awesome, great way to have them get together

wow . . . just, wow. so good, so hot

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Well, shit. O.O
That... was awesome. Gruesome, angsty, and very, VERY cruel, but awesome. This was an awesome piece of work, my friend.

More, absolutely loved it! :) keep going. Xo

I absolutely love your portrayal of Loki, he's just so in-character, and everything he says I can completely imagine. Also I had never really thought of the idea of Maria/Loki until now, but it fits so beautifully. I love how much Loki has to be in control of every situation, control people. It was also clever how you had him in Maria's dreams, it was something a little Inception-like but with your own original touch on it, of course! Overall, if you couldn't already tell, I loved this :)

Wow...so dark and disturbing. Fantastic writing. I felt her fear at giving up her control while I was reading. Truly haunting - great work.

This was wonderfully written. I've never really thought about Maria/Loki until now, but now you've certainly caught my interest. Now to read other Loki/Maria!

Nice take on how things were going with Maria.

Oh. Wow. I am almost at a loss for words here. So dark, so amazing. I really whish I could give you a long review, but as it is now, I really don't know what to say beside that this is fucking brilliant.

Yap. That was dark all right. Wish there were other fics of this pair, but not dark at all XD
Geez and she just resigned herself with a finality that made gasp in disbelief!
So he gets his pet, but if it were a multi chapter story I guess he'll entangled in his own game, even if he insists to lie to himself. XD

Hot hot hot

That was a pretty good story.

So sweet and passionate at the same time. Loved this! You should continue it.