Reviews for Tokyo Mew Mew 3
Moon chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Ember Ardent Flame chapter 3 . 5/23/2012
Fave parts for this chapter:


"Can we go destroy Tokyo now?" (It was a good line for Hyper, like a little kid asking, "Are we there yet?")

As things are, I like the mood swings in his character. He kind of makes me think of the boy lolita type. It's a rare addition to the aliens (as most stick with sinister/perverted personas). I like the uniqueness of yours.

And you developed your characters! :)
Lokiismylife chapter 4 . 5/23/2012
I take it Dire Bite has a different personality in this story?
Lokiismylife chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
You know what Blaster's sword sounds like? My weapon from Guardians of Tokyo. Is that what you based it on? You're the one who came up with my weapon, remember? I can't wait to see what you write next. Good Luck, Ayame-chan!
Lokiismylife chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Wow, Ayame-chan, this is good. You've always been so good at describing people! I can't wait to read more!
Ember Ardent Flame chapter 2 . 5/20/2012
Not a bad idea. I liked the Anti-Mew idea and the fact that one of them is a guy.

I would suggest some grammar lessons and something to assist character development though.

Hyper sounds like another annoyance to Pai, which enhances the story by making someone more annoying than Taruto. I like it when people invent new aliens.