|Reviews for Back|
| VirginaBlueBelle chapter 8 . 9/17/2014
It's a good story so far. I would suggest getting a beta for it now that it's finished. Especially since you have two "big" mistakes that could be easily fixed checking harry potter wiki. Hermione's patronus was an otter, not a beaver. As for the Hogwarts lake, it is inhabited by a giant squid, not an octopus. But like I said, it's a good story, just needs to be proof by a second pair of eyes to fix spelling/grammar and occasional missed character facts.
| LoveInTheBattleField chapter 50 . 5/27/2014
This story was nice.
How God Created Mother
God took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
| Crayonbird chapter 17 . 1/26/2014
I was excited to read this 3-part story, but I am abandoning here. It is turning out to be too much work to correct spelling, grammar, and typos as I read. Many of the sentences are poorly constructed and I find myself having to re-read about 25% of what you've written. Perhaps having someone go through and smooth things out would be beneficial. You may have a great story here, but the technical details have overshadowed the creative parts.
| Arabella Lee Smith chapter 21 . 1/13/2014
Darker and darker.
| tainted-tash chapter 50 . 10/18/2013
I'll see you in Return...
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| tainted-tash chapter 45 . 10/18/2013
Yes! Hes back!
| tainted-tash chapter 44 . 10/18/2013
| tainted-tash chapter 43 . 10/18/2013
Poor Hermione... I hope he can return soon!
| tainted-tash chapter 42 . 10/18/2013
No, he most certainly isn't stupid...
| tainted-tash chapter 41 . 10/18/2013
Not a good start to a conversation :/
| tainted-tash chapter 40 . 10/18/2013