|Reviews for A Darker Beginning: From Orphan to Folk Hero|
| ChocoholicWriter chapter 3 . 16h
This started out good however the chapters became too short for my tastes and then the goblins reactions were too unrealistic for the Potter universe. Try and work on portraying the goblins as more violent and bloodthirsty and less tolerant of wizards, even dark wizards.
Also, I don't understand how Narcissa was able to glance at Diagin Alley and know how everyone walking past was a Muggleborn. Surely they don't have signs hung around their necks?
I won't be reading any further, not because the writing isn't good because it is but because the direction the story is taking is not to my tastes.
| sam chapter 10 . 10/12
I do hope this hasn't Ben abandoned? Just found it and really liked it. I always thought Harry should have at least been grey with all the history of abuse and distrustful of dumbledore. I hope this will have another chapter soon.
| hermonine chapter 10 . 10/9
Great story, update soon!
| LandlessLord chapter 10 . 6/28
Can you update some time soon ?
| LandlessLord chapter 8 . 6/28
Why not use the right of conquest to justify Harry's parselmouth ?
| LandlessLord chapter 4 . 5/2
I agree with you there, I don't understand how Harry let himself be modeled into the light's pawn by Papy Dumby when he was mistreated by the muggles he would be in charge of protecting, prophecy or not. I accepted it for the sake of the story but I was doubtful of that.
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 10 . 4/29
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! THIS IS FANTABULOUS AS EVERY STORY IS
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 9 . 4/29
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! HARRY WILL ACHIEVE GREATNESS IN SLYTHERIN AND THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 8 . 4/29
INCREDIBLE I LOVE IT! THIS AWESOME
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 7 . 4/29
AMAING JOB I LOVE IT! ITS FANTABULOUS
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 6 . 4/29
DUMBLEDORK WILL BE FOUND AND TAKEN TO JAIL I BET ON IT
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 5 . 4/29
DUMBLEDORK DESERVES IT! HE IS A MANIPULATIVE BASTARD
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 4 . 4/29
THIS STORY IS GREAT
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 3 . 4/29
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! BUT POOR HARRY AND I'M GLAD HARRY WILL BE LIVING WITH THE MALFOYS NOW
| DRARRYLOVR4EVERINMYHEART chapter 2 . 4/29
AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! THIS IS INCREDIBLE