Reviews for Dominating the Alpha |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you continue this story. You've got me hooked and I want to read more. Please keep going :) |
![]() ![]() It's probably too late since its been more than 3 years since you published it but I liked this. I'd love to read how Embry became Jacob's dominant and what kind of kinky fun they get up to. Hopefully, you'll update it one day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More plz! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo! Next chapter please :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's interesting. Definitely has potential. I'm curious to see more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I love the story! (Here comes the but) BUT! You should change the way Embry talks. He talks as if he's telling it as a story to Jake and not like he's telling it to someone else(unless you meant to do it that way...). Other than that I can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() more please ? :D loved it x |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far this seems like it will be juicy! I wonder who Jacob is married to and I'm ready to read about the progression of Embry/Jacob relationship |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Freakin' Awesome! I can't wait until you post again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm very interested |