Reviews for How to be a bride
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2015
That idiot made it up! Hate how Cagali is acting like a brat though. Why can't she open her heart?! Her husband loves her to death!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
RenCaggie chapter 12 . 10/13/2014
please continue.
50 people are following this story. so, you know? they wait.
including me


yeah? :)
RenCaggie chapter 6 . 10/13/2014
RenCaggie chapter 5 . 10/13/2014
spirit to contiuuuuueeee!
RenCaggie chapter 4 . 10/13/2014
good job author :)
RenCaggie chapter 3 . 10/13/2014
RenCaggie chapter 2 . 10/13/2014
Azmaria Eve chapter 12 . 10/9/2014
next next next! cheers!
TheHouseOfAthhaZala chapter 12 . 3/2/2013
Wkwkk... Almost got tricked! I tought after the bed scene then bam.. she gave birth. How quick! then bam... It was a dream. I don't know whether to feel relief or dissapointed wkkwkk... XD
Great. Update soon!

328231 chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
This is cute. You took a ridiculous idea, and made a funny story. The summary makes this sound like a vampire fic, though, not a funny romantic comedy. I suggest adding something along the lines of "not a vampire fic" to the summary

You do have grammar issues here and there, but it's not serious enough to take away from the funny nature of the idea. If you want to fix the grammar, then I'd be happy to proof read for you.

And thanks for reviewing my story
Fate Camiswhil chapter 12 . 2/16/2013
I agree with Cagalli, I can't possibly imagine myself giving birth like that, that would be too excruciatingly painful...XD

I can't see the image, can you post it in the group? please and thank you! :D

this is great, they're making progress! I do hope you update soon! this is a really nice story and I would love to keep on reading about how to become a bride...XD

it's not near the end yet! you still have Cagalli's birthday and that KiraLacus dilemma to solve!

update soon!

Fate Camiswhil chapter 11 . 2/16/2013
OH MY GOD! that was even better than the previous chapter! I love it! AsuCaga should be like this in the series!

this is becoming quite complicated, there's actually conflict in your story! LOL! anyway, if Kira decides to be with Lacus, how will that affect Athrun's plans? if Cagalli chooses to be with Athrun and to be the Queen then wouldn't that make them rulers of the world? that's something to look forward to...XD

Fate Camiswhil chapter 10 . 2/16/2013
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! this is all so cute! yes, they kissed! XD

it was so cute how Cagalli thought kissing in the lips would be french, I can't wait for Athrun to teach her the difference...XD'

I also loved how Athrun made his entrance bold for all to see, when he came to fetch Cagalli...X3
Fate Camiswhil chapter 9 . 2/16/2013
I liked how you wrote Flay here...XD I always loved that character so thank you so much for that!

Ahmed's scene with Yuuna was hilarious, it was so close to how they really are in the series...XD

And yes, I agree... I think Flay and Cagalli have a lot in common when it comes to personality, but Cagalli isn't gonna be manipulative like Flay and that's good...XD

LOL at the bet they had about Milly, for a second there I thought it was weird for her to be talking about Dearka like that, then it turns out to be a different guy... I hope you get Dearka and Yzak join the chaos...XD
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