|Reviews for Infinite Swords|
| Xelloss33 chapter 1 . 8/12
Guest and DrunkenPanda : check again, you're confusing the thrust version with the throw version of the Noble Phantasm. The latter doesn't have the causality inversion effect.
| DrunkenPanda chapter 1 . 7/18
Like Guest says Gáe Bolg is a definite kill unless your like Saber, she only survived because she had high luck while Lancet has horrible luck. Some food for thought I wonder would happen to Kirito(SAO) if Gáe Bolg was used against him? Pretty sure he would survive because bullshit plot armour!
| kunai909 chapter 10 . 6/29
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/6
That's bull, Gae Bolg is a definite kill - 'the heart has been pierced, so the spear must have been thrown'; unblockable, inescapable death
| DeathSeeker96 chapter 13 . 3/24
what happen to you? i have been waiting for a long time for the next chapter. Please don't stop, this story is one of, if not the best fate/stay night crossover that i have read.
| jordanlink7856 chapter 13 . 3/15
That's the end of that. It was a very nice read, just as enjoyable as Mechanized Magus, hope to see more.
| Diaspared chapter 8 . 2/23
In terms of real world physics, half of this stuff is quite literally impossible until and unless we figure out exactly how gravity works.
| Mr.Destructo chapter 13 . 11/9/2016
was a nice story while it lasted ended right when the plot started evolving
| OriksGaming chapter 1 . 10/1/2016
Huh. I'm not sure if I want to continue reading. I like the plot and your writing is decent- except for your formatting, which is absolutely terrible. When you're writing dialogue, you need to start a new paragraph when a new person starts speaking no matter what.
"You want the high school entrance exams, right?" I asked, already knowing the answer.
"This building is really confusing," the kid said sheepishly. "I don't know where anything is supposed to be . . ." He trailed off, looking for some sort of sign to guide him.
I gave him my best smile. "Don't worry. I'm here to help."
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Otherwise, it's just difficult and painful to read- as your story is. Even if I manage to make it through this fiction and enjoy the plot, I can't in good conscience favorite this unless you edit it and actually fix the huge formatting error(s).
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
Any /sword/. Any /sword/ he sees.
jesus fuck i know the story is dead and this is but you'd think that people would bother to remember the most basic fucking facts about the works they draw on
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/12/2016
Wow... I cant believe this fic is dead. It was ... quite good, surprisingly. Very true to a still distorted Shirou. Wish there was more.
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/2/2016
hopefully he doesn't tell anyone about his magic
| carwash36 chapter 13 . 7/18/2016
| thepkrmgc chapter 13 . 6/8/2016
its a shame this wanst continued, the plot was just hitting its stride!
| thepkrmgc chapter 12 . 6/8/2016
it seems like we found the reason why they stole the cores, their probably trying to restart a grail war or something, hopefully shirous's most recent battle with lancer will go better then his first