|Reviews for A Love Before Time|
| tinkingit chapter 6 . 5/22/2012
So I have read the whole story. I think that you should put in the summory that it has a sad ending or maybe that there is a character death in it. The ending was just soooo sad. I also think that you should take the story out of the Severus S. & Remus L. header cause it is a little miss leading just like the SS/RL/OC were as it should be SS/OC and RL/OC. I am not trying to be mean or anything so PLEASE don't think that. This is a good story but I just am so sad now.