|Reviews for A New Beginning|
| Gold of Termina chapter 3 . 10/5/2013
What's with the 3 sentance chapters person
| fragments.in.the.sky.named.you chapter 2 . 5/23/2013
Okay, quick nitpicking here, I think the chapters are a little too short. Either that or they're going by a really fast pace because I'm really not understanding how this is working. How did Jonas end up in the Seam anyway? I don't know if there's anything referring to the Capitol accepting visitors into the Districts.
Also, after the Hunger Games, Prim and Katniss wouldn't be laughing and having a gay old time. The Hunger Games is emotionally scarring, so Katniss would probably be too shaken up to be so cheery, even on her homecoming.
Aside from that, I personally love the idea of crossing over The Hunger Games and The Giver. Both the main characters come from dystopian backgrounds, both obvious in their own way. I'd love to see how this plays out, but try to take your time setting up the plot and transition (show don't tell) and hopefully, this'll turn out to be good.
| ravenlogan12 chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
up date soon. wrote on the wrong chapter last time.
| ravenlogan12 chapter 2 . 3/22/2013
| Jelly-fisher68 chapter 2 . 1/27/2013
| XxXIamaroleplayingfangirlXxX chapter 2 . 7/26/2012
Please. Update. Soon :)
| emyK chapter 2 . 7/2/2012
I like this! :) keep writing
| UDFlyers chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
Awesome start, combining my two favorite novels! Epic! Update soon please!
| KAnders4198 chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Good so far. Hope you write soon. :)