|Reviews for Ruins of Babylon|
| Zatch Bell-01 chapter 1 . 2/16
So that Lucemon is a fake being controlled by the real deal in order to see and communicate with the outside world?
| Anon chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
Why do you always gotta do this abandon your great fics when they have so much potential it's a shame honestly I remember reading gardens as you were writing it as a kid I grew up reading your stories
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/26/2016
Amazing! Please update soon! This is my fifth time reading this fanfiction alongside of the prequel. I can't stop dreaming for the next chapter! Thanks for writing this!
| RoyalKnightX chapter 3 . 5/4/2016
Ah, poor GranDracmon.
Both this and Gardens of Babylon were an absolutely fantastic read. You, sir, are a master of combat scenes and battles of wits and creativity. And kudos to you for making Takato into an almost literal god without downplaying the others too much - Henry in particular, I've found myself quite pleased with. That one knows something's up.
Should you find the time and motivation to continue on with this, I'm sure I'll be hanging on every word, but if not, well, then thank you for sharing what you did create so far.
Best of luck.
| draco7347 chapter 3 . 4/13/2016
cant wait for new chapters
| FlawlessMirage chapter 3 . 11/20/2015
I dunno what to even say...
This is is just really, really good.
| Undying Soul98 chapter 3 . 5/31/2015
Wow- this story is too good. This fic is excellent, the Game is an awesome idea, Takato is badass and I utterly love this. I have marathonned this story so quickly my mind literally hurts to such an extent I can't give this review the coherent matter it deserves. Either way, thanks for this, even if you have clearly abandoned it. I regret that it will not update and that the story will never end, but sometimes these things happen. So long and thanks for all the fish.
| Arbitrary Escape chapter 3 . 1/24/2015
I love this work. I remember reading it some while ago (this and its prequel) but I don't remember if I commented or not. I woke up in the middle of the night and had this urge, this maddening thought that I had to recall and revisit this story... I sat around on my Favorite's list until I found your pen name (I knew I didn't have this particular story favorited at the time but I did have your Naruto works added)...
Thanks for all your works. While I can't say exactly what I dislike, I sometimes feel as though certain characters are... a little different than what you seem to portray them as, or they go too far deep into extremes that I wouldn't expect; sometimes that makes them appear out-of-character, but nevertheless, the story is good.
| Chiusa123 chapter 3 . 12/31/2014
lucemon's ignorance in his own untapped potential is truly appalling. a being that could so much more than the scapegoat of christian myth.
| thor94 chapter 3 . 10/4/2014
can't wait the next.
lucemon interest to takato is confusing.
all those things about freedom, take over his body look like an act. by his attitude (blush, care, petting, possessive, his own words, etc), i feel lucemon has a strong LOVE interest to takato (in sense, they married and had many childrens), he want him to not being alone anymore, he want turn him in something barely immortal to have someone to spend his long life.
the "takato is mine" or "if i was female, i would procreate with him and bear his child" is obvious.
lucemon see takato as his soulmate, or simply his mate. and let anyone take his precious beloved boy.
lilithmon kissed juri, i really want seeing lucemon kissing takato
| nobody52 chapter 3 . 9/22/2014
really hope u come back to this, easily one of my favorite story's on this site.
| Icedevi the digimon chapter 3 . 8/3/2014
| Benevolent Darkness chapter 1 . 7/6/2014
Why haven't you updated this?
| Shadowbreeze chapter 3 . 5/23/2014
I was hoping you'd at least update this yearly cause one chapter from this series sustains me more than your Naruto one. Although I have been intrigued by your Nasuverse writings that I've found in TypeMoon forum, so if you are doing that instead that's also cool
| Benevolent Darkness chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
This is truly incredible. I'm in awe of your writing and ability to do... well, everything! When do you plan on updating? I'm really looking forwards to the next chapter. This, I can truly say, is the best fanfic I have read on this site. If you change some of the non-original content around in this story, you could easily sell this as a novel. I really hope you continue this!