Reviews for LILY
gr8rockstarrox chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
Wow, that was beautiful. I love free verse, so of course I read free verse like a maniac. And Lily-Teddy is my most favourite second gen pairing. So even if Teddy comes across as an imbecile in this, I still go awww.
racketeer chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
I absolutely loved this, you capture so much and in so few words - so beautifully and emotively written.
Lucifersdaughter chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
Nicely put :D
Alli Adamson chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
I liked it. :) Especially the formatting. haha
weasleyjumper chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Wow! That was a lot of story for a freeverse, but it was very good! You should definitely do more
merdarkandtwisty chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
the emotion was perfect crucifying Teddy not so much.
LilyFerrumLupus chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Aw poor Lily! That was really good, by the way! I love how you punctuated things and made it look really cool and unique. Great job!