|Reviews for Almost Perfect|
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/18
Please write more
| OliverSykesLover chapter 4 . 12/20/2013
omg michael is sooo cute!
| 3 oli sykes 3 chapter 3 . 12/20/2013
omg omg, i just looved this! Lili is so awesome! xoxo
| mariana sykes chapter 2 . 12/20/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
I love your history, please keep on.. I need this!
| MichaelMia4ever chapter 8 . 8/13/2013
Seriously there's nothing for you to worry about..the story is awesome i couldn't take my eyes of the screen for even a second..you're an awesome writer.
Pls. continue its okay even if its M rated
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/20/2013
This is interesting, so hopefully you update sometime soon:) and it's a little m rated but not allot since nothing much really happened
| Me chapter 8 . 7/4/2013
Pleeeeeeeeeeeease keep goin wit dis
| KripperTheGreat chapter 8 . 6/9/2013
Omg omg please update! It's been almost... 10 years since you updated? Maybe I'm probably most likely misreading that... Anyway, please please update!
| Aishmita chapter 8 . 5/24/2013
Write on! Super interesting :D Go on writing! PLEASE :D
| Arorastone chapter 3 . 5/14/2013
just show a sex scene
| reader136 chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
I hate embarrassing moments you made me go under my covers and say im done
| abigail chapter 8 . 3/13/2013
ooh finally she's gonna give in but any way i like it, it's a good story:)
| NeverTellALie chapter 8 . 3/10/2013
I think your fine in T.
You had me at the mention of grease!
And how I missed Doo Pak! I'd almost forgotten about him.
And it was just a dream. A hot dream. And now that Mia's been dreaming about it we know that she's definitely considering it. And she was so confident in her dream, more like a grown up version of herself.
So is Mia going to try and act out her dream or just act more confident in general? Either way I cannot wait to find out.
| NeverTellALie chapter 7 . 3/10/2013
'But that's how you do it!'
Best. Line. Ever.
Mia's insecurities raise their ugly heads again. Mia always was so insecure so it's nice you've stayed true to that. It seemed to be something Mia always had until PD10 when she was definitely more confident.
Mia can be a frustrating character to write because its hard to know just how she'll react to certain situations- and due to the fact she's always growing and changing- the way she might react to a scenario in one book maybe different to how she'd react to the same situation in another- but I think if this had happened in the eighth book then Mia would have acted the way you've had her react. In some ways she wasn't ready in the eighth book and other stories don't get this and have Mia jump into bed with Michael as an alternative ending.
I like how you're showing and continue to show how Mia is growing in your story and that she will be ready soon as a consequence.