Reviews for open eyes
kingstonavery chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I love it!
flawsmadebeautiful chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
I almost died. I was freaking out, because I thought Albus was going to die. That would have been terrible! And I just wanted Albus to wake up in the end...very awesome.
autumn midnights chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
Oh, I loved this! Auror-focused fics are really interesting, and the action scenes are written very well. I love the mention of Fay Dunbar, Stephen Cornfoot, and Kevin Entwhistle, since they're such minor characters. I've used minor charries in the Auror office too, haha, and I love when people do that. Harry is in-character here, definitely, and you've characterized Teddy, Al, and Scorpius very well, also, and given them realistic personalities. The repeat of 'Al's chest rose and fell' worked very nicely in those last few paragraphs as well, and overall, I really enjoyed reading this. The use of Avis as a Patronus is really creative, as well - I've never thought of anything like that. Wonderful job, mew!