Reviews for An Alternate Passage
Acacia Eastbramble chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
I'm very curious about where this going and why the viral didn't attack him. Please continue!
Adria Zoi Parzifal chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
It seems a bit unrealistic, considering the fact that the viral didn't get him and humans really don't run that fast. So maybe you should make it a bit more...well, realistic. Yup. And your writing needs to be a bit more intense, descriptive, something that makes you want to read it and read it fast, gobble it up hungrily with your mind. You get me?
Yoholic chapter 1 . 5/24/2012
I loved this book, since you are the second to write a story on this fandom i hope you the best
androidilenya chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This looks fairly interesting! Never read the book it's based on, but I'll review anyways, just 'cause.

It was a bit short, which is fine considering it's your first chapter and your first fanfic. But it was great writing! Unlike some other stories on this site your spelling and grammar was actually correct. Great descriptions, too.

Keep it up!

ai