Reviews for Of Lust
Guest chapter 4 . 9/22/2014
this is such a good story! i never read a hidan x deidara story, but now I'm in love!
Gai sensei chapter 8 . 2/26/2014
So full of youth


I looooovvvvvveeeeeedddd. Iiiiiiiitttttttt
Xzias chapter 10 . 11/25/2013
I loved this story very much! o

:( you took out a scene?! Long lemons are the best though! I loved your lemons! They were really long and detailed! You're just really really amazing at writing them! :D

...they have all been really naughty this year. I don't think they'll be getting any presents from Santa : ... XD

Xzias chapter 3 . 11/22/2013

T'was a good chappie. But I noticed something you do quite often that you could fix. The story all of it just kind seems a little creepy. I was wondering why, but the I realized, you don't use commas often. You use "..."s for all pauses. "..."s are used to represend long sometimes questioning pauses in wrighing while commas are use to betray short pauses; a place that you take a breath in the middle of a long sentence. For example,

"I have a night shift darling... you boys have fun but eat before you do... dinners in the cooker... be good..."

Could be,

"I have a night shift darling. You boys have fun, but eat before you do. Dinners in the cooker; be good."

I'm sorry for the correction but punctuation makes a huge difference in the meanings of your stories.

Arianna Black chapter 6 . 3/25/2013
After reading for the third time I relized someting!
You should make a sequel!
With Sasuke, Naruto and Human Kyuubi!
and then have Sasuke/Kyuui/Naruto!
Ignore me FanGirling over here!
I love this story!
I want to see a sequel!
Oh yes and you know have my fangirl heart rolling!
For the third tiime with the Hidan/Itachi/Deidara pairing!
I love your stories, continue writing them!
Shadow Of A Cat chapter 10 . 12/20/2012
It is perfect. It is everything you look for in a yaoi. And please, please make a sequel where Hidan carries out his evil plan.
Erandi chapter 10 . 10/13/2012
This deserves more than 60comments!damn hot.i'm glad that i found ur stories :-D
female-fool chapter 10 . 9/22/2012
Def goes to my favs this story!The lust is so simply presented,no sugar-coating at all!And the last line as usual made me "wow"!:D
female-fool chapter 8 . 9/21/2012
Fuck!That was the hottest threesome ever!It was so seriously passionate and at the same time light enough to read easily!Great story!:)
female-fool chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
Ohh i just looove how the story unfolds slowly and teasingly!:P
And a threesome...hmm,my favourite! Its great and I cant wait to get to the next chapter!:)
female-fool chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
Thats pretty much the most detailed "first time sex" scene ive ever read!It was bloody good really!Its hard to figure out what could possibly happen next and what Itachi's role would be!
I like everything i read so far!Going for the next chapter now!:)
female-fool chapter 3 . 9/19/2012
Wow(outloud actually) for the last line!:D
I seriously liked that stuff with the dirty slut,the best friend and the trust!Its quite a smart idea indeed!:) Im only wondering hows Itachi gonna get "inserted" in this story and if someone's gonna be brokenhearted!:p
Itachi-Uchiha-lover chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
Freakin amazing it really was. I loved this sooo much so hot and with my three Fav Akatsukis too just amazing great work.
Rin Shwarz-Feuer chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
WHOO! I totally fell in love with HidaItaDei when I read a really steamy oneshot and since then I've wanted to read more but I wasn't really getting any... So I just wanted to say thanks for writing this and it was really awesome!
KillerKitty chapter 10 . 8/9/2012
OMFG that was freaking amazing this group seriously needs more writers like you i read all the chapters sorry for not reviewing on them all but i only review at the end of the story. i freaking laughed my ass off at the flirting in this story your a f***king genius. i love love loved it keep writing and making the dreams of overly perverted fangirls come true :3 KillerKitty was here Meow ;p
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