Just capture this...you here posted just another SPECTACULAR A/W story.! And this ending...this ending simply throbs! You are something else...KEEP WRITING WRITER!

MMMOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE! :)

Wow. This is... I don't know actually lol. Weird, in some ways, but it totally captivated me! Can't wait for chapter three

Am really enjoying this one, next chapter please...

I am amused with your story. You write well but I totally cant imagine Will behaved like that. It is somehow just not like Will although heist deeply hurt.

Great story, i look forward to more ! :)

AAh good story so far! Update soon please, I really need to know what happens next!

Feels all too likely...and so sad for Will's broken heart. Like your having Alicia reach out to help intervene his depression isolation...like a true friend would do...another dash of reality-like behavior...which has been all to missing from show writers characters' breakup behaviors for my belief. Do appreciate your writing and this plot development is most intriguing. Please, please do have them have more open dialogue for Will's sake especially and for Alicia to face and self assess her own feelings and needs more as well as Will's. Thank you and please continue soon. I'll want to check daily for your updates.

Oooo I'm intrigued ! I want to know what happens. !

Yeah, they're such alcoholics, I can see it! What does she say?

Sounds cool. I'm interested. And of course Will's depressed without her!