|Reviews for Friendly Fire|
| omnomnivore chapter 25 . 10/11/2013
Melinda... goddamnmotherfuckingcocksuckingdementorbuggerershi theadedassfuckingcuntlickingbitchfacedouchenozzlef uckityfucker.
Those are my feelings about her plus more. Just skip over that.
You brought Hoyt back to life in an unexpected and absolutely horrifying way. I honestly was not expecting the ending to be Maura or for either of them to live. And the choice of death... Damn. That was cold.
I hated that bitch from the beginning, but you just had to go one step further...
I love when a story makes me honestly fear for the characters' lives. I really had no idea if they were going to make it and when they did, I was overjoyed that I wasn't expecting it. I really hate the whole rizzles-fix-it-all. (I really don't know how to describe it any better than that.)
I just want to commend you on writing a story that made me beg for them to live. Wonderful writing.
| kimdw78 chapter 25 . 10/6/2013
| gram.waitforit.pola chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
I so hate her! Wanna punch her face!
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/1/2013
This is terrible. Way to make strong women victims.
| Vincent52 chapter 25 . 6/29/2013
I am SO SORRY I'm just now getting to finish your story. (June 29th) I have been out of the loop for a long time with computer troubles, compounded by money troubles.
I laughed out loud when I first read "Detective Vincent." I loved it! I even ended up being a pretty nice person in your story! LOL. Thank you for allowing me to be a part of it. It was a great story!
| Magicfull chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
| Guest chapter 25 . 3/31/2013
Everyone in this story suffered from a serious case of stupidity. Extremely unrealistic and down right silly at times. I hope your next offering will be actually coherent.
| rizzles21 chapter 25 . 3/22/2013
really enjoyed reading this story. cant wait for your next one
| wercomingup chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
She is such a BEOTCH!
p.s. enjoying the story.
| wercomingup chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
This is interesting...I will continue on to the next chapter (smile)
| LeeLecavier chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Outstanding story. Loved every bit of it.
| Marcela chapter 25 . 1/25/2013
Hey Kelly! Amazing story. You took us for quite a ride and I enjoyed everybit of it. You are an excellent writer and I just wanted to leave you a message saying I hope to read more from you soon. You're beautiful with a smile to match, so smile often for you should be proud of your progress. Looking forward to more from you. Come back to us as soon as you can. We miss you and class hasn't been fun at all without your smile.
| Bambibelle84 chapter 25 . 1/23/2013
I wanted Jane to kick Melinda ass so bad make her suffer a little but it ok. This would be great if it has an epilogue.
Your story was amazing! Great thriller. You're a great writer. Thank you for sharing with us. Hope to read more of your future stories.
| Bambibelle84 chapter 24 . 1/23/2013
Wow that "Hi Love" damn. Im Glad Maura is safe i just hope Vincent doest screw up.
Shit is about to go down now.
| Maggiemay201 chapter 25 . 1/21/2013
Great story,I've watching it,somehow I missed you putting up the last chapter. Nice writing style,loved the story wishs for a healthy and happy 2013. Hope to see more of your writting this year!:)