Reviews for His Angel
desireejones99 chapter 25 . 18m
Really don't think the goblins were telling the whole story, ah well ma y be the answers will come in the remaining chapters or i n the new chapters you may write in the future

excellent entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 24 . 57m
Interesting the amount of debt, though it should have been off set by the mother and daughter's actions. Just a bad guess from The small amount of info

still exceptional entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 21 . 3h
My main request is if it's not Harmiony, please don't saddle her with Ron.

Excellent entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 20 . 4h
Actually, Hermione is stuck as a friend because of her actions,nif shehad choose Harry over trying to make Ginny and Ron happy or even written during the summer because she was his friend. Just do not see them being anything but passing friends after those choices
desireejones99 chapter 11 . 11/25
Realization just hit me Hermione reacts the way she does out of her love for Harry that she did not share with him soon enough. So nowdealing with jealousy she feels towards Fluer, of course yo probably had some other device.

So confusing the synopsis has Discontinued but the status is listed as Complete

still exceptional entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 10 . 11/25
But it's so easy to bash them, especially when Molly sends Howlers, beyond idiotic when sent to her own children, but even worse when sent to friends of her children. Then there is Ron and Ginny thinking they are owed Harry. The others of the Weasley family seems worty of friendship, though Arthur needs to take control of thkse that seem to have no control

exceptional entertainment
Lokreid chapter 33 . 11/25
Мы всё понимаем, все мы люди. Будем ждать и надеяться на ваше душевное спокойствие. С любовью, преданный читатель с России. ))
desireejones99 chapter 9 . 11/24
Hmmmm, Well Fluer is out as she's competing Hermione will be Victor, Gabby for Fleur. So Dumbles and company will make the bad choice of Ron

excellent entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 8 . 11/24
Maybe by the time I read the next 25 chapters you might have the 34th and 35th chapters finished. Yeh yeh and I'm a Chinese fighter pilot

still could happen

exceptional entertainment
desireejones99 chapter 4 . 11/24
Excellent entertainment, though Harry's making the same mistakes not sharing the nightmares with at least Sirius and Remus
desireejones99 chapter 3 . 11/24
Always felt that Hermione would get along well with Daphane, as they would be some of the few in runes and Arithamancy other than the Ravenclaws. Still a very excellent story
desireejones99 chapter 1 . 11/24
Excellent start, and actually different from the other Fleur/Harry stories I've read and I've read lots of Potter FanFics

exceptional entertainment
Kyoki Kamanoke Shinigami chapter 11 . 11/8
I recall you saying that English is not your first language- with this in mind, I must say that I am completely blown away with how well you have begun to write as of recent chapters. I am proud to have read this story, and feel like I am better off for it because it is an amazing story. The scenes are powerful, and I can often lose myself in them. I advise you to keep in mind, I read nothing under 250,000 words, and even then, my review rate is seldom, if ever. I wanted to give you this earnest thanks in return to you giving the gift of this story to us readers. Thank you.
Guest chapter 33 . 11/7
sorry to see you go this was and still is the best harry potter story
0rth3us chapter 29 . 11/3
I have read this story up up to this chapter in under a day and I have to say, this is the best harry/fleur piece I have read. However, when there aw the 5 month jump I lost the story and it seemed that all the character development in Harry went out the door. He went from a man in love but insecure to slightly deranged and then back to normal. The jump was too great and you lost me. It seemed that the quality of the later chapters slowly started to degrade from the amazing story at the start. Now after reading your note at the end I completely understand where you are coming from with ending the story. I am very sorry for the loss of your friend.
I hope that you will have more long harry/fleur stories in the future because you are a fantastic author. Thanks for the journey :)
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