| Reviews for His Angel |
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   burt1669 chapter 33 . 9/22/2019 Dude imma bout to cry I love this story and am sad but I understand writing it to a close would suck so I’m not mad |
| burt1669 chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 Reading the first paragraph I like you already gonna read the story even if I do t like it just for the “I’m not atime traveler” made my day. Truly hope you see this |
| kogentasprimo chapter 1 . 9/13/2019 mister author on a funny note wouldnt it be awsome to own a tardis? |
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/12/2019 Amazing story |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/12/2019 Damn good story so far |
| death390 chapter 33 . 8/22/2019 This is one of the better stories I have read in a year, solid 9/10. While yes there are flaws they are few, even the OCs are well done and add to the story rather than steal the show. I will follow this in hopes to see an update for the rewrite but I don’t think I can favorite it and read again. The lack of any kind of defining moment really hurts, the promise is there though. I knew going in this was unfinished but I am a bit of a sucker for harry Fleur. |
| Dasgun chapter 1 . 8/22/2019 оо |
| CasperShot chapter 23 . 8/6/2019 I have to disagree with your assessment that the infusion of non-magical blood weakened magic over time. It seems like the opposite. Dumbledore, halfblood. Voldemort, halfblood. Harry potter, halfblood. MERLIN himself, halfblood. I'm not sure about grindlewald, but given the previous examples I would bet money he was a halfblood as well. |
| CasperShot chapter 12 . 8/4/2019 I've read this whole story about 3-4 times now and just noticed the line Voldemort said to him in the graveyard about how harry looked like his mother and "had a pretty face" lmao. I don't know how I missed that before. It immediately makes me think of goldenrod like a character from deliverance. Shoeless, wearing a pair of overalls with no shirt and leering at him while "You got a purty mouth" |
| CasperShot chapter 7 . 8/4/2019 It seems like the full force of flames from a magical creature like a Dragon would be almost as destructive as fiendfyre (almost). I don't think that realistically, any shield could stand up against that. If it was possible, it would be either Dumbledore or Voldemort who could ever hope to accomplish it. |
| Anon chapter 11 . 7/30/2019 This, is not a healthy relationship. Harry is always the one in the wrong with Fleur up on a golden pedestal. He gets poisoned and she slaps him and makes him apologize for someone else putting his life in danger...this is crap. I'm sorry. Yes he knew something was wrong. Yes he still went into the lake. But what gives her the right to put her hands on him? After she knew how he grew up even. Plus the fact that people find it funny or justified (i.e. Aurelie) is just sick to me. |
| Firesparq chapter 1 . 7/21/2019 Really wish someone would pick this story up. If they offered, would you be willing to let them continue/rewrite it? |
| Relentless Dragon chapter 33 . 7/20/2019 it started off good but as i went on reading its like less and less soul went into it and the ending is meh |
| Neotono chapter 7 . 7/17/2019 Part of this chapter has gone missing. Not sure how since it was there last time I read this. |
| DarkLordWhatsit chapter 1 . 7/8/2019 I wish you people would just take down a story if it's discontinued. most people don't really like reading a story that isn't complete. |