The author used the word "depress" like it's just the word "sad" lol..

The hell? Harry snapped at Molly, Ginny and Hermione but never Ron?..

Awwwwwwwwwww

I love my freshly baked cookiesssss

- Thorn

Awwwwwwwwwww

I love my freshly baked cookiesssss

Thanks Dura

- Thorn

Overall I really enjoyed this story. There were so many different plot threads that were super interesting. I loved Harry and Fleur's relationship and his whole relationship with the Delacours, as well as Fleur's friends (especially loved Aurélie). However, I hate the summary/epilogue you've outlined, I'm kinda glad you didn't finish as that angstfest of an ending does not fit the overall fluff of this fic... It was going to end with Fleur's death! I much prefer to believe they would've triumphed over Voldy and Fate would stop Death's plan, so Harry and Fleur could live a long, happy life and have those children. Anyway, thanks for sharing what you'd written, I still enjoyed it overall.

I'm gonna be brutal in my review... (Devilish grin)

I love it.

There, that wasn't so bad was it?

I'm honestly glad you spared Cedric's life. Thank you ever so much for that. Though, again, unpess you changed the age of the twins, they should be in Sixth Year, not Fifth, where the OWLs are taken.

Also, impressive Twist by adding Greyback as a villain and getting Crouch killed so quickly.

But who was the Death Muncher that Harry killed? Curious.

In this chapter you mentioned that the Twins were sitting for their O.W.L.s this year, but that would not be correct. They are in their Sixth Year, so they wouldn't have any particularly important examinations until the following year.

anyways, I'm enjoying this story very much. I hope you're still writing...

Didn’t mean to hit send on the blandest comment. Although It’s still relatively well written. My thoughts don’t matter as long as you like the story. It’s interesting for you to add every trope imaginable yet finding a different way, just slightly thinking the line. Although not you have a lot of sub plots here that I doubt will be tied up by the end of this.

Out of all the questions he could’ve heard and possible reactions this might be the blandest.

He’s quite the sad sap. Where’s his witty replies to Fleur?

If you’re having him leave you should either have him ask Sirius how to make the mirrors or Fleur how to make the notebook to keep in contact with Daphne. Maybe even giving her the one that Fleur have him.

Hmm where’s the attack. Voldemort or the ministry need to try and send another message I hope. It’s been too long lacking a bit of action.

Don’t have anything bad to say. Thankfully you aren’t writing an anatomy book so you managed to keep it within the plot without making me feel the need to skip ahead too much. Just a few lines. In all pretty good. Few grammar mistakes which I think were changed or switched but not deleted

You try too much to keep him awkward. Sure it’s endearing but you stress so much how he’s so much more mature than those around him. You can be awkward without being a bumbling mess

I feel like I’ve read the grope and run line a million times.