I don’t know why everyone seems so hellbent on making Harry a welcome mat. “I understand if you want to leave me.” How many times? It’s like a broken record.

Fleur not calling him “leetle boy” is something I’ll miss here. So many ripples to make.

That’s the lamest scene after the flash back.

I’d happily phase Ron out of existence at this point. Unless you’re trying to Iron Man Ron like Stan Lee.

Not that some isn’t needed I really hope you don’t go overboard on the struck speechless. Here’s to hoping it’s actually occasional.

I hope you avoid the female competition cliche.

Ah the gentle break from plot. Butterfly effect in full motion. All from a haircut.

I hoe you come back and finish what you started.

Trashy story.

Hey, this is kind of ironic. It’s a Fleur and Harry paring, yet it’s called His angel, not something like His Flower?

great story thanks

Don't mark it as COMPLETE if it's discontinued!

I feel like you aren't bashing them as much as making it realistic. Ron honestly to me feels like a fair-weather friend. At times when Harry needs him he can push through, but it feels really shitty if he abandons him in a second when a lot of people doubt him. Hermione is eh, depending on how you take her character and shape it. Her early parts are awful, but she builds decently. Her biggest deficiency is authority worship, but when needed she pulls through regardless, unlike Ron who can easily get swayed.

Review from a picky reader (SPOILERS):

Some of the main problems can be linked to repetition: Harry blushing far too often, Harry always passing out and Harry expressing the same insecurities to Fleur every few chapters.
I was kind of hoping that with all of your references to Death, the visions of the 3 brothers and the flashes of the white tree (which I thought was the Elder tree but I now know to be the Yggdrasil tree) that the 3 hallows would play a major role but even after identifying his invisibility cloak as a hallow from the vision, he doesn't even seem to care about what he possesses.

I also think that too many arcs were introduced. The information that Lily was adopted led me to believe you would do something with her ancestry line but all it did was overcomplicate things and open a plot hole as the blood magic around number 4 should never have been activated as Harry and Petunia do not shared blood. I'd hoped something would happen with that murderer in France with the bounty on his head but nothing ever came of it. Then there is also that whole thing with the book written in Latin that only Harry and James could read which unfortunately wasn't mentioned again. Harrys "Mage Sight" or whatever it was (It was never confirmed) was just forgotten about. What went on with Daphne ignoring Harry was never talked about, nor was this Hawk character that you made seem was going to be training Harry. I'm a bit disappointed that you let the half-lycanthropy thing go as it was definitely one of your most unique ideas. The introduction to the fact that Fleur needed a change in wand was also a bit abrupt and I see what you were trying to do with the whole "Fate" idea, the identity of Fate was intriguing but I find it unrealistic that Harry would simply surrender his life to Death so easily... Harry being Harry would do everything in his power to change the future, if not for anything but Fleur. They spend 32 chapters practically telling each other that they can't live without each other because their bond is so strong and they need each other too much yet he just gives up his life and therefore Fleurs rather than fighting, as he should and would. Some may say what he did was noble and maybe cannon Harry would have given his life without thinking of both the consequences and his options, but the Harry that you have created is intelligent and is actively trying to not be a mindless pawn.

Apart from them issues (Many of which can be fixed with a bit of editing), this is definitely one of the best Harry and Fleur stories out there and was a great read overall, it was well written and had many intriguing and unique plots such as the Love Potion scene and the one where Harry stands up to Ragnok which I have never seen done before. I especially loved all of your OCs and Gabrielle and Apollines relationship with Harry, that is always an extremely important aspect to a Harry and Fleur story and you NAILED it. Overall, I would definitely recommended this to any fans of this ship.

Other top stories that I have read of this ship are: The Lies I've Lived, A Flower for the Soul and A Cadmean Victory.

This story is very good with some unique events such as his half-lycanthropy and the goblins seizing everything he has but unfortunately there is a lot of annoying repetition going on here. The passing out (I think we are at 11 times now), the blushing for comments that would realistically not get much of a reaction out of anyone, the same conversion happening in different wording that goes something like: "You just deserve someone better than me Fleur, I don't know why, when you could have anyone, you chose me", Harry said, downcast. "Don't let me 'ere you say somezing like that again", Fleur growled. Like, seriously, she has told him to never say that again about 8 times. And then there is the fact that Harry is scared and apologetic towards Fleur like 5 times a chapter, no matter what he says or does to her, his reaction is to cower... That can't be healthy.