|Reviews for That Awkward First Meeting|
| N-31st chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Brilliant way of writing it! I love it! :D
| Celestial Rainstorm chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
This was brilliant, it really captured the emotion of the scene well. It's good to see WBADS on this site. I adore that movie.
I only hate three crituques, for the MERE REASON I AM A DINOSAUR NUT.
1. Elsa is actually a cross between a Pternaodon and Dimorphodon. Mostly she is a Pteranodon. Cotrary to popular belief, there is no such thing as a Pterodactyl.
2. It is proper to italicize the dinosaurs' species. If you aren't able to, that's okay.
3. It is also proper to capitalize all the mentionings of the dinosaur's species. Otherwise, this story was brilliant!
| Roman GK chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
That was really funny! Kinda reminds me of the "Avengers" movie. I don't know why though. But anyway great story!