Reviews for Chance to Change Final
Dark Kyuubi chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Great beginning. I would like it better if Minato and/or Kushina would have survived but that's not do bad. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
iMTheStormKing chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Very well written chapter... I definitely wanna read more... Hope you update again soon..
Trinel chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I liked it more when Kushina survived. And while I like Anko, I'm not looking forward to seeing her as a main character here.

Didn't like the whole "before being sent to the past" bit, though. Too much info on stuff I didn't really care.
CaliDreamin chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Very very interesting, hope you update soon. Also will Naruto use the Mangekyo?
NARUTO1 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
I really hope you can keep this story going this time.
Addictive Label chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Intresting enoughi guess.. the whole "before he came "back to the past" kinda sucked.. to elaborate.. i skipped most of it really.. took up half the chapter to just get to the point were he got Kamuied. hopefully you wont re-write this story again so we can see what happens in the future.
Kaiba1288 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This is an awesome story you are a very good writer,

Good luck with this & any others you may write.

Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Peace & Jah Bless

Kaiba1288
Naginator chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Interesting though i liked kushina surviving better. Was tobi izuna? And not quite sure what naruto did with their chakra it doesnt seem any dif from what they did in canon
Impstar chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Well, it's a good start. Hopefully is IS your final version.
Toby860 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Well now this already has a better start then the other 2. If I make a sugestion for a pairing. Please use yugao. Think about it, great role model for naruko strong and her fiance would of died anyways change it to allow her in the pairimg.
toolazytomakeanaccount chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
3rd time this has been remade right? Hopefully there's more than the last one. I liked this story the first time and i hope it gets better. looking forward to it.

Though maybe you should set a poll for the pairing.
Wrin chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Please stop re-writing this and just get on with it...I'm rapidly losing interest in seeing it re-done over and over.
Raven Marcus chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
interesting!
windfox90 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Man this was a great chapter I like it very much Im so looking forward to the next chapter also I think you should add Mikoto, Konan and Kurenai into Naruto harem
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Wow this was a awesome first chapter you did a great job it was so much better than the other two I cant wait for the next chapter also I was thinking for Naruto harem it should be Anko, Kurenai, Yugito, Konan, Mikoto and Hana please update soon
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