|Reviews for Hades & Persephone|
| H. L. Thorn chapter 15 . 7/11
This story was amazing and beautiful.
| BrownEyedHoneybadger chapter 15 . 6/30
I loved this!
| Violet97mc chapter 1 . 5/5
| Violet97mc chapter 1 . 5/5
Brilliant! Can’t wait to read more! I love the premise of this story!
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/28
I personally found your version of the story to be one of the best.
Rebel suits persephone.
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/1
I appreciate your imagination. Keep it up!
| AnaBookWorm chapter 15 . 2/26
Loved the story!
| Fanficreader chapter 15 . 1/10
OH, was this good! Just loved everything about, I loved how the whole situation with Minthe was found out super fast, and the situation was dealt with quickly! I loved how Persephone chose to rebel and realistically began to despise her mother. So cute, that they have kids and continue to love one another! I even love how Hera got owned! And their dating period was so cute, and I was so happy that she had a friend who actually cared for, worried for and only wanted Persephone to be happy. She didn't betray her in any way, which is so sweet.
Just loved the story! U wrote this so amazing!
I will definitely come back to it, when I need a Persephone and Hades story.
Ps. sorry for the post and if it was really random. I just waited till the end to write what I thought about everything.
| Laylen chapter 15 . 11/19/2017
This story is fantastically written, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. It made me laugh and I even complained about Demeter at points, the story was just that good!
| Jade R. Manning chapter 1 . 9/11/2017
I like this idea a lot
| Asso chapter 15 . 8/28/2017
This is really a great story!
Yup! A story to read from head to toe and all by a breath.
How did it happen to me.
| Smengel chapter 15 . 8/22/2017
The best fic I have read about this topic. Very well informed and very well written! Thank you for sharing! I truely enjoyed it :) but thought* ;)
| Hadassa96 chapter 2 . 5/16/2017
I re-read this and I hope you don't mind but I am going to refer people to read your story.
| sonder this chapter 1 . 1/7/2017
The thing about Greek mythology is that the gods seem to fall easily and they fall hard - this one is no exception. The instant Hades and Persephones saw each other, it was like instant love and while that sorta-kinda follows the greek myth, it was hard for me to invest in their relationship here because there was no real development. Persephones felt he was dangerous upon her first couple meetings with him (and we never really knew why she felt that way. It couldn't be because he was dark because she was fascinated about that aspect of him) but in the next couple seconds, she was smiling at him across the room. Besides their first meeting, she doesn't quite ever show hesitation or true fear and while you justified the latter in that she feels safe with him, it just feels odd since this is her first time even interacting this much with the male species.
The Hades you described here scorns his brethen for their lusty ways and shallowness but in his observations of Persephones, there is this constant stream of his admiration for her physical attributes and beauty and wanting to act upon his desires; so is that not hypocritical of him? Of course you also managed to include that that's not all he likes about her but when he did not know her, her curves, face, and innocence were the main stars of his focus.
I am not saying you cannot write because you can but the development part requires much build up.
| i create chaos chapter 15 . 12/4/2016